Reviews for Near Fatal Accidents

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chocoluvr 2008-08-12 ch 2,	abuseGood chapter in showing Fred's reaction to George's injury and how Ginny comforts Fred.
Jess.91 2008-08-11 ch 2,	abuseOh, wow, you did it again. This was amazing. I loved all the emotions, and it all seemed to fit. And the ending was perfect.
FinnFiona 2008-08-10 ch 2,	abuseOh, heartbreaking ending! I think you've both really captured Ginny here, just perfectly. Her thoughts on Harry in the beginning--just exactly on point. And she's such a good sister... I think it really fit well the way you guys kept her around through these discussions. The way Fred and George sort of talked through her at the end--excellent. Of course this is the one thing that they just can't face... for the first time in their lives, probably, they really need help understanding and communicating (which is probably scary all on its own) And George with Molly...! (By the way, loved all the subtle mentions of the rest of the family, etc. and how they were doing...) That was just so touching, though. And Fred and George worked out well, too, I think. You guys definitely brought a fresh look on those ideas... :) This is really beautifully done--I love the way they're tying together and can't wait for the third :) Great job, you two! ~Fi
melissaeverlasting 2008-08-10 ch 2,	abuseThe Weasley family is always going to be all right. That's what we love about them. I also love your writing and your stories; they touch the heart and are real and genuine. You're fantastic, both of you, and I look forward to reading much, much, much more from you! :D --Melissa
StarUponHeaven 2008-08-10 ch 2,	abuseAwesome chapters.
HPFanFictionFan 2008-08-10 ch 2,	abuseThis was really a scene we missed reading the book! Thank you so much for writing it!
hondagirl 2008-08-09 ch 2,	abuseWonderful, absolutely wonderful. I loved the Ginny and Fred talk, it was great. Looking forward to the rest!
Cassandra's Cross 2008-08-09 ch 2,	abuseBless Ginny! She had to be the strong one here, as the women in the family so often are in these situations (ain't it the truth?). This was especially poignant, knowing what happened later to Fred. I'm assuming that will be the next, and final, installment in this series? God, that's going to be a tough one.
little0bird 2008-08-09 ch 2,	abuseI loved the tension in this. The tension of sitting next to someone's sickbed wondering if they're ever going to be all right again is captured beautifully, especially Ginny and Fred's reactions. There was that moment when all the waiting was over and you could almost hear the door Harry slammed shut between him and Ginny once everyone had been accounted for. It makes you wonder, though, if Fred used humor as a coping mechanism, and never really learned how to handle emotional adversity. It makes you wonder what would have happened had it been George who died in the end. Those boys really taught Ginny how to take care of herself, because I'm sure they teased and roughed her up to the point where she could handle anything they threw at her. She's definitely no shrinking violet.
Kittyboosmom 2008-08-09 ch 2,	abuseI definitely like it. I really like the way that you're showing the sober side of the twins. Until DH, whenever JKR wrote about the twins, they were always up to mischief or (even in bad times) making wisecracks. Don't get me wrong. I do like that side of their personalities, but it made them seem superficial, even if they were "Side" characters. I forced myself out of the writer's block & posted Chapter 7. I must be doing something right. AS of now, four people have me on their story alerts. Only one review so far, though. Rats! At least it was a good one. Have fun. The Vulture awaits more chapters (lol).
JJ Rust 2008-08-09 ch 2,	abuseGreat job getting into Ginny's head and portraying her strength as she smooths things over with the twins. I also liked the tension between Fred and George. I don't think they ever argued in the book, I mean seriously argued, and brothers argue . . . or so I've heard from others, since I'm an only child. Anyway, good job on this.
Jessluvsharry 2008-08-09 ch 2,	abuseThat was a very good chapter :) Poor Fred. He must be feeling awful about what happened to George. The whole family seems to be shaken by it. There have been a lot of tiems that the Weasleys have almost died. It must be hard for them to actually believe that they would all be ok in the end with everything that had happened. It's a good chap. There's some sadness, but George was ok and that's what mattered Jess
tamara72 2008-08-09 ch 2,	abuseFantastic.
hondagirl 2008-08-04 ch 1,	abuseSo Dodger Gilmore told me about this story and I'm glad I checked it out. I like how protective and worried the whole family was about Ron, you two really showed the bond. And poor Fred and George, I mean these are their younger siblings, thet're supposed to protect them. But they can't, because there in the midst of a wat. So well done so far and I'm looking forward to the rest. -honda
strawberryfields091 2008-08-01 ch 1,	abusei like how they got into an argument and then it seemed to resolve itself, seems very twin-like. can't wait for the next installments!

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