I've read so many Dr/Hr fics that I've practically been able to predict what's going to happen in them. This story was sweet and made me tear. I was looking for a fic that would make me tear and I found it. Very good!

This is a great one-shot. When I was reading this I could clearly see each scene in my mind. There's a song that goes along with this fic, its called One Last Time by The Kooks. The song was sorta the background music when I read this awesome fic. Again, I say Great Job

omg..
that was beautiful..
call me a cry baby..
but it was so sad and beautiful.
it did make me cry...

I cried at the end of the beautiful piece. Excellent job!

stunning.

one word. beautiful (=
really sad, though.

sweet

aww man
thars really sad
hmph
:(

I don't usually respond, but I had to tell you my reaction - "Wow"

truly well written, powerful story. I hope you continue to write.

aww i was SO disappointed that draco died. then again i never think anybody should die soo.. lol. but this was beautifully done. it was like a vignette? i hope that's the word i'm looking for. maybe montage? i enjoyed it immensely. the only thing i really didn't like though was that too many things seemed ironic especially involving the kids. i was kind of like umm ok both of the kids look like the dad with their moms eyes... right. it just didn't do anything for me. it was great though. nice, sweet, and sad.

=D

So good... I loved it. Really well done.

i'm crying now

love it

going in c2 group

Hi, i don't usually like the hermione/draco pairing but this ones really well writen nice, thanks your a really good writer.
Els