Sasusaku?

i liked it :)
Im mila-dream-believer from deviant.
As i told you there, it is late, and this is the chap i wantes to read the most, the others ill read later :)

I just think everuthing happens too fast.. but what the hell, is a one-shot :)

ah kakashi! knew he couldnt resist! sheesh what a perv

my first sasukarin fic...

yay for narusaku!!

they were all so sweet :D.

put a smile on my face! its cool that you go straight into the story, usually people have a blurb at the beggining and end. but im cool Im cool.

that was simply awesome. for the next pairing do sasukari. lemons big lemons please can't wait for next story!

loved your newest chapter. you should naruhina next. and put some lemons in it o.k. till the next chapter a big fan


P.S put more lemons in your story it may seem like extra work but it will be worth it to the readers.

keep going man and write what you is right for these stories

wickid awesome. Keep going and dont stop cant wait for your next story

One thing: Girls dont have semen. lol I hope that was a typo. Anyways yay for shikatema!! they make an awesome pair..you said you were gonna do kibahina next right? that should be interesting! lol :)

Aw. The NaruSaku one was cute
The InoSai one was too funny xDD I love how she taught him how to have sex with the full on experience!! lol
The LeeTen was also cute and funny too! :)

Keep it going!!

haha Sai really reads too much...its does more harm then good. Ino seems kinda slutty in this, but hey that suits her so its fine. ^^ when are you gonna do a shikatema?? hehe i love that couple! :)

Hmm so they removed this on DA because of their ages and the mature content? Its not very explicit and for all we know they could be 18 in this. >.< gr DA is stupid sometimes! lol anyways this was your first fanfic right? so good job and keep writing ^^

I like this chapter. How about Ino and Sai next about Sai tickling torture Ino because he reads in a book that girls like guys who makes them laugh all the time.