These two need more love more often...and way to go with writing them in almost perfect character! :) (I only say almost because, with what we are given for these two, it's sorta hard to get them down correctly...But you did damn well.)

Aw, I thought it was actually rather swell. I do love Kariya, and I think there needs to be more love for him. You do him rather well. Yashiro too, really captivated that weird, quirky, mood-swingy personality of hers, haha. Very nice.

It's a good tale, starring two characters that certainly deserve more attention than they're getting, and were certainly written in character. I, for one, thoroughly enjoyed this fic.