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| CountryGirl8 2008-09-05 ch 5, | abuseLOVED IT! |
| digidestinedofhope 2008-08-29 ch 1, | abusethat last line was so horatio |
| Julie172006 2008-08-10 ch 5, | abuseAwesome story and I do indeed see wy you put the two of them (Ryan and John)together lol! That's good! Short and sweet story hope you come up with more! Take care :-) |
| lily moonlight 2008-08-09 ch 5, | abuseThat was great! Ryan n peril, can't resist XD And I loved the idea of him being confused with the actor, neat twist. I liked how you described the laughs, and I'm so glad H rescued him in the end :) |
| daxy 2008-08-09 ch 5, | abuseawesome story! |
| CarusoLover 2008-08-08 ch 5, | abuseAWESOME SARRY! And I got to be a MOVIE STAR (I'm Kat Kingston, tho thats not my real last name...IM FAMOUS! WE Anyone want my autograph?) Yer a literary GENIUS Sarry! Write more stories NOW! |
| heyyo 2008-08-08 ch 5, | abuseBWAHAHAHAHAHA It was hilarious! My favorite line: She killed Stacey, they were both insane. It was all for the love of Jonathan Togo. |
| Jag Lady 2008-08-08 ch 5, | abuseHi Sarryb. This was cute. Just watch your punctuation. You had the wrong "its" in the first paragraph. You actually inspire me to write a similar one in which Rick Stetler is mistaken for David Lee Smith. Problem is, nobody wants him back! Do you write mostly Ryan stories? --JL |
| luf100 2008-08-08 ch 5, | abuse“You think that I think I'm Jonathan Togo? No way, he's way hotter than me. He's such a talented actor. I could never do what he does on screen.” I literally LOLed at that, I have no idea why but I found that sentence hilarious! *phew* Anyways, I loved it Sarry! It was freaking awesome. :D And no I'm not just saying that. Even the shortness of it wasn't bad. ^_^ |
| luf100 2008-08-06 ch 4, | abusePsh, naah, Jonathan Togo looks absolutely nothing like Ryan Wolfe. Uh uh. :P Anyways, it's awesome Sarry! I hope there's more soon. :D |
| jjhotchforever 2008-08-06 ch 3, | abuseMy jaw dropped when I saw the name Jonathan Togo. Nice... Really Good... Keep it up! |
| Jag Lady 2008-08-05 ch 4, | abuseHey, no problem on the spelling. I know you speak British and understand American. HEHEHEHEHE!! Aw, that's okay. Let's hear all about Ryan naked! ;-) Can't wait to see how this is shaping up. --JL |
| will'sdutchmanmistress 2008-08-05 ch 4, | abuseFirst off LOL Ryan talking to Jonathan. Lol Ryan is talking to himself!!. Lol!! Ok seriously I love this story please update soon. This is so funny I love it! |
| Jag Lady 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseOoh, so Mr.Wolfe is gonna meet Mr. Togo, huh? This should be fun. Looking forward. I thought about one in which Stetler somehow made an acquaintance with Cmdr Karma Rice from JAG (both played by David Lee Smith). I'll be reading more. --JL |
| luf100 2008-08-04 ch 3, | abuseI'm likin' it a lot! Poor Ryan! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D |