 yorushihe 2009-10-05 . chapter 9pretty cute! XD
I loved-doved-coled-moled(anyother non sentical word with -oed)
ok, I won't comment cause I don't feel like it, though, I will place my best wishes on Hiei Kagome! I'm a very fierce defensor of the first dib calls that Hiei did half millenia ago on Kagome u.u *hands lawyer card to Hiei*
Kurama is being mean! I dun like his character much, thoug, if he keeps his sexyness I won't mind (much) ;D
I loved the way you introduced Koemma! very interesting and amusing, It gave me the idea that he was trying to showoff to Kagome XD since he heard her story and became interested, he wanted to cause good impressions, I thought so cute! even if that wanst the idea you wanted to pass...
And Sesshoumaru presence was more of a filler character than anything, he didn't do much, though, he was still there and that's an extra cookie to the rabid Sesshy fan girls out there.
Shippou too! is very cute the way he taunts Hiei xD That's why Hiei was used to Kurama's antics, he had to live with a maturing fox before. Talking about it, when are Kurama and Shippou meeting? It would be pretty amusing, though, I imagine Shippou taunting Kurama the same way he does to Hiei just to stir jelousy >8D
Ok, finished my ranting/comment, now you can rest in peace since I dind'd drawl on yout horrid writing style (actually didn't find no thing horrid to comment on) So yeah, positive starks on your plate gains a cookie's jar ticket! x)
Everyone loves COKIES! yey!
ok,I'm sane now.
Bye! Kisses on your left lung, near the diafragma! |
 Selenay Of Antioch 2009-07-11 . chapter 9Oh this is fabulous, I hope you continue to update, I always enjoy stories of Hiei, but I also adore KJagome, so this is like a piece of lovely hot apple pie. |