So I'm totally late to the whole Bee/Cade party, but I LOVE this fic. ^_^ I know you probably won't write any more...but I can always hope. Hehe. Great characterization on both bots. That ending with Barricade speaking to Bee as he drove off was just...man, gave you the little stomach flutteries. But yeah, fantastic little fic, wish it were longer. ^_~ Rock on!

this was just mind-blowing. intense, introspective, and altogether just something completely new and dark. you kept so true to their movie counterparts (i myself have never seen anything besides the movie), and it was perfect. thanks; faved!

O.o Omg. That was PERFECT! SQUEE! Omg plz tell me you're going to update! O.o I love that third last paragraph. It was your first time... wasn't it? PERFECT! ^^

Wow, haha, that was entirely too hot considering it was mech-on-mech vampirism. Hope you decide to write more at some point.

Wow! This was absolutely BRILLIANT...I'm not even sure what to say, you wrote this so well! How a human might humiliate another through sexual/erotic intimidation, but using that situation for transformers instead, was very cleverly done. I could see the parallels to what it would be like if Bee and Barricade were actual people, but at the same time you made their relationship unique in a way that only transformers can interact. This was so awesome, I hope you update soon!

Woah...
Nice vampirism~.

Bee's so cute and confused.. adorable.
I can so see Cade doing something like that.. Heh.

Barricade's act of desperation was horrible; the way he sucked on Bumblebee's neck reminded a scene from the vampire movie, and that mind games he played with the youngling... Ugh, it sent shivers down my spin. I would rather not think what else his twisted processor will come up with when it comes to 'Bee, but reading about it is another story ;P I'd like to see how it will turn out.

- chimeraone

Please, please, please, please, please write more! This story reminds me of the fable of the dog and the wolf comparing their lives and the wolf scoffing at the dog's collar. Barricade is obviously the wolf and Bumblebee the dog. You did such a wonderful job portraying Bee's emotions and Barricade's scorn in this story!

Hey! I just have to say that was very well written. It's refreshing to see something that didn't have mistakes every sentence and I could just enjoy the fic for what it was. I look forward to reading more of your writing, most especially anything CadexBee.

Oh, I liked this! No criticism whatsoever. I have a real weakness for vivid imagery and in-depth character exploration, and this has that in spades. The complete and utter lack of misspellings, bad grammar or improper word usage also makes me a very happy camper. I hope you plan to continue with this, because I'd really like to see where you take it. If the first two chapters are any indication, it's sure to be a wonderfully satisfying ride.

Well written. Fascinating. Intriguing. Kudos to you. I hope to see more soon.

Well you've got my attention, that was interesting. Please post more ASAP.

This was indeed yummy... I require moar Barricade x Bumblebee from you. Hot... his first overload. Pur. Purrpurr... X3

M...Yummy... WE NEEDS A SEQUEL! D: