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| megan 2008-08-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg that was actually kinda funny in parts. like, "actually your time ran out when we were talking about your brother. you're her for eternity" that's hilarious! |
| msllamalover 2008-08-06 ch 1,  | abuseAhh! The first Labyrinth fanfiction I've written!! This was so well done, very incharacter - Jareth especially! This challenge was ace :D |
| purpleumbrella 2008-08-05 ch 1, | abuseOops? Oops?! She kills Jareth and all she can say is "Oops?"?!?!?!? ... And here I was excited that i was reading a different ending from the movie... Oh well, other than the last bit, I still enjoyed this fic immensely. Good job |
| sylphxpression 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseYou killed a creature of Faery with IRON! How heartless are you?! Don't you know what agony the mere touch of the stuff is?! So speaks the one who prides herself on her powers of torture chamber design... Er-hmm. Anyway, that was really rude. |
| zenstereo 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abuseOh, I should have known when the genre said "tragedy"... But really, I laughed pretty hard. Poor melodramatic Jareth. He can be kind of silly, can't he? |
| Dark Angel Princess 13 2008-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseong! Kore how could you! i'm sending a PM! i just... omg. |
| Princess of the Fae 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseDON"T KILL JARETH! |
| yshtabi 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuse"“Ew!” she cried, scrunching her eyes up and looking away. “That is so wrong. You’re so much older than me, and that’s just nasty.” Jareth could literally hear his heart shattering and falling to the ground in a tinkling of pieces. She did not… “I wouldn’t ugh, be with you if you were the last person in the world!” Sarah cried, disgusted. More pieces fell."" Hilarious :D |
| Almaria 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuse*snigger* now this sarah is more like my kinda girl! hee hee! |
| Lixxle 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseWHY!?! Dear gods WHY!?! *sobbing* At least you could have taken his shirt off first. Evil woman. HILARIOUS. He is such a drama queen. |
| Emerald The Lady Destiny 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuse*gasps* I hope you're happy, Kore. You had me laughing so hard I started -wheezing-. I hate it when I do that. But this story, however...well, -I- at least am not going to yell at you for killing Jareth. I mean, it's his own fault really, bringing such dramatics into it. Totally brought it upon himself. That being said...no, I have nothing better to add, since I'm still wheezing. Well done. |
| Megsy42 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseLOL! That was hilarious =D Beware of the fluffy bunnies o.o I think the fluffy bunnies might come and flame you now for killing off their beloved Jareth. I'll just, er, go, before they get here. ;) Good job =P |
| Mysteriamoon 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuse*Jaw drops open* You killed him. *SOB* |
| Greene Finch 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseHeheh.. Oops? Nice ending! |
| FaeriesMidwife 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseOMG! ROTFL! I love it! Hehe... Too freaking funny. You had me LOL the entire time. Sarah's revulsion was hysterical! Oh, criminy, that was just awesome. The last line is just classic. Oy! With all the romantic angst in my own story, this was a welcome reprieve, let me assure you. I do agree with notwritten and another reviewer about the code word, but eh... the story IS labeled as humor and tragedy, so people, pay attention to the categorization! Humor and tradegy does not result in a happy ending! There. My public service announcement for the day. Thanks, Kore. That was faboo. See ya back at FaeMail HeadQuarters... faeriesmidwife |