Wonderfully romantic! Beautiful story. Please consider writing another Narnia fic.

So far marvelous! I love this: “When you can feel something as powerful as Aslan’s spirit with you then you know you have no need to fear and there’s no room for doubt.”

That is exactly how I envision Aslan too...he is everywhere; protecting; watching. So very well done!!

Just started reading this. Absolutely wonderful. I'm hooked and drawn in. How wonderfully you paint Susan. How well you've gotten inside of her. Well done! I'm going on and cannot wait for more.

and now peter and ivy can get busy! hehe! sorry, i had to. well, now comes the analysis of the whole story. all in all, i liked it. i will say, the ending was a bit too cheesy for my liking, but you know me. i liked ivy's character. she's very much like you, rachel. i will say, edmund's character, to me, seemed to stay as true to the movie as any other. i don't know if it stayed true to the books or not. i loved trumpkin and aslan of course! it was pretty good, but, i will say, i liked your savin' me money story better. maybe it was just that it was not as fantastical as this one was. anyways, great job sis! it really was very enjoyable! ;)

what was he to do? dadada... hehe! i have to say, the part where ivy embraces pattertwig and twitter made the most hilarious picture in my mind. i imagined her squeezing pattertwig against her chest too hard, and the little squirrel gasping for air. hehe! maybe it was just funny to me. also, loved the symbolism of the wardrobe in the very beginning of the chappie. golden!

hey there babe! sorry i haven't reviewed in so long. i've been super busy. this chappie seemed to whiz by. i realize that if it were captured on film, there would have been more to see and hear. anyways, can't wait to read more.

*SQUE* That was AWESOME! I loved the whole story! You did an amazing job.

Oh, how nice that Peter and Ivy ended together :D Thanx for writing a beautiful story. ;)I really like the final words, nice title to the last chapter.

man!
i love it!!
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but i wanted susan and caspian to be tpogether. but it's great. im happy ivy became human with peter!!

aww i am happy that ivy chose to be with peter, but sad that susan couldn't stay with caspian. but overall a very nice ending to the story. it seems like it came all too soon. i do hope to see more stories in the future. well done! =)

It was very funny image that appeared in my head, Lucy and Susan and Edmund trying to explain Peter not begining with them.

Oh, thanks 4 the updtate!! It's a hard chose for Peter, Susan and Ivy, let's hope their chose will be for the best. Nice story, of course I'll review 4 the last chapter ;)

gr8 chapter! please please update soon!

oh no! what will peter and ivy decide to do? it would be so sad if they will never see each other again. i can't wait to read the next chapter! =)

O_O I hate cliffhangers! Please update soon! Excellent chapter, by the way!


~~Ranger