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Spellcaster Hikaru
2008-11-02 . chapter 7
I admire Cloud's ability to remember his way around Midgar slums. >> I would get so lost if I went down there. I would love working at that bookstore though! I love books! I could just see myself in that woman's position with Cloud standing at the counter. ">> ...
Spellcaster Hikaru
2008-11-02 . chapter 6
Kya! I had to drive back up to collage (I sympathize with your work load. -_-') so I had to wait until things settled down to start reading again but I was so happy to find your review reply! >w< I just love talking with authors probably just as much as you like getting reviews! Don't worry to much about putting out the next chapter soon. Sometimes school work just sucks up all your time. XP I'm pretty patient most of the time so as long as you update I'll be happy. ^^ This chapter was cute though! >w< I swear the little kiss when they were eating ice cream made me go 'aw.' XD And the image of an angry, frantic Tifa wandering around looking for Cloud made me laugh. Hm, I wonder if she might have run across Aeris durring that time. Barret's language makes me laugh too. 'About time foo'. XD *ROFL* I loved hearing him over the phone in AC. He sounded so great. (In the Japanese version at least.) Oh, oh! That reminds me! Are they going to meet Vinny?! Are they? Are they? >w< I always thought Vincent was the most awesome FF7 character in the whole game! Well, him and Reno and Rude. XD Those two always make me laugh. And of course there’s Zack, but he’s a given. XD Now, on to the next chapter! I wonder where Cloud’s wanting to go. =w=
Spellcaster Hikaru
2008-11-02 . chapter 5
Hah! Finally action! Not that the fluffiness’ isn't cut but I find a fanfic more fun when it has fluffiness and action. Imagining the fight scene was awesome. >w< I couldn't help but think back to Zack's big fight in 'The Last Order' (Which you need to go watch if you haven't seen it! It's on youtube. >w> That must have hurt. But I still can't help but get excited about what he'll be like when Zack starts teaching him. *cackles evilly* Shinra won't stand a chance with the combined forces of Zack and Cloud! *sighs wistfully* And now I keep having all these images pop up in my head of how certain scenes in the game would go if Zack were there. Particularly the scenes involving Sephiroth, Nebelheim, and Jenova...And Hojo. XD Maybe Zack can kill him off earlier than he died in the game.
Spellcaster Hikaru
2008-11-02 . chapter 4
XD *ROFL* Yet another fluffy chapter. I can just imagine Zack's expression being something like: O.o When cloud kisses him. XD The ramen scene was pretty funny too. Reminds me of my own attempts at cooking. I once turned a chicken patty into a pile of black goo (literally) when I stuck it in the microwave for too long. There was black smoke coming out of it and everything. XD The scene with Cloud wandering off to look at the sword reminded me so much of a kid. Maybe Zack should get a leash so he doesn't wander off again. XD Hm, I wonder if Zack's going to be shocked over just how improved Cloud is. I mean, even though he needed a little more training and battle experience, Cloud's probably the only person who could fight Sephiroth and win. Oo That’s a pretty big accomplishment. And to think Hojo was indirectly involved in that...Then again, Hojo was the one /responsible/ for everything so it's kind of his fault Sephiroth went insane. >> I always hated that freaky scientist.
Spellcaster Hikaru
2008-11-02 . chapter 3
*ROFL* XD This chapter was so hilarious!! Poor Zack's so confused. It must be awkward going from being so close to someone who's basically in a coma to being close to someone that can actually respond. XD The modeling scene was funny as heck too, though I'm not sure Cloud would have done that if he was completely in his right mind. ^^' I think he'd be a little more flustered like Zack. Hm, that makes me think, the only good reason Cloud was probably conscious enough to even reach Midgar and join Avalanche in the beginning of the game would be that Zack's death shocked him out of it...I wonder what would happen if something like that (not necessarily Zack's death but just something else traumatic) happened now. Zack would probably get some extra cuddle time with an angsty Cloud. XD
Spellcaster Hikaru
2008-11-02 . chapter 2
XD So cute! I do feel bad for Tifa though. Even though I don't really like Cloud/Tifa, I've always been really fond of her. XD I couldn't help but cackle with glee when she showed up in Kingdom Hearts II. *sighs* It must be frustrating for your friend not to recognize you...Then again, poor Zack had it even worse having to haul around a completely unresponsive Cloud for four years. >> Gah! I'm getting depressed at the thought. Must move on and read more Zack/Cloud fluffyness.
Spellcaster Hikaru
2008-11-02 . chapter 1
*sighs happily* I'm so glad I found this fic! >w< I just love Zack and Cloud! It always makes me depressed when I see scenes of Zack dieing so I'm always on the look out for fics that keep Zack alive. And really, Zack seemed more like the type to not give up even if he was full of bulet wholes. If nothing else you'd think he'd be worried about sending a half crazed Cloud out into Midgar alone, but no, acording to Square-Enix (not that they're not awesome) he just gives his sword to Cloud and dies. >P I like your fic better. XD Now, onward to Midgar! *starts humming world map tune*
Alexis4
2008-10-26 . chapter 7
Aw. How cute. And I feel so bad for poor Aerith. Zack might actually have to tell the poor girl the whole truth for once. Still, Cloud's adorable but I think as more and more of his memory returns he's going to have to deal with the trauma of the experiences. Great job. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon.
Micro chibi baka-san
2008-09-07 . chapter 5
baka-san likes! update soon!
KoKoDisco
2008-09-02 . chapter 5
Great as always! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Update soon!
lovemelovemenot66
2008-09-01 . chapter 1
Chapter 6? :):):)
lovemelovemenot66
2008-08-29 . chapter 4
So cute!! is this the last chapter?
330INSANITY
2008-08-24 . chapter 4
Really like this... AH, I dont really know what to say. But thanks for givin me an excuse to mentally squee.
~INSANITY
kcgal
2008-08-23 . chapter 4
Can we say 'aw'? XD

Except, I nearly burst out laughing when Zack was trying to explain, because I kept on thinking 'ohohoho, Zack is giving Cloud 'the talk'!'... "Well you see Cloud, when two people love each other very very much, they sleep together in a bed and ... uh... >_>" heh.

Not much might have gone on, but I found it really cute anyway! And it's nice to see them all 'domestic' and calm.
KoKoDisco
2008-08-19 . chapter 4
Oh i just love this story so much, please update son!
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