|Reviews for Better Man|
| Lola 3/21/13 . chapter 1
Wow, it's amazing!
Great description of Amon's thoughts. I'm really impressed! :D
And sorry for my English, but I'm from Poland.
| importance of leather gloves 10/28/12 . chapter 1
You've captured the inner struggle *cough*neurosis*cough* very well!
| AngelDustAddict 5/5/10 . chapter 1
Wow. I love this, mostly because it's abtsract, but not too ambiguous, and it sounds almost as if it comes straight from the heart. ]
| Shadoe Dysteria 2/14/10 . chapter 1
I love you for this.
This has always been one of my favorite stories, and, as creepy as it sounds, this and Anne Frank used to be my bed time stories.
But, thank you for this...
I've always loved the Holocaust. WWII in general.
You did an amazing job.
This was him to a "T".
| Virtuous Vampire 8/10/09 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this. You portrayed Goeth very well. His inner struggle was captivating. There was one spelling mistake though. When he was walking down the stairs it should be 'creaked under his weight' instead of 'wait'.
| Secono 5/15/09 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Truly one of the best pieces I've read on this site. I'll definitely look into your other works as well.
| JimandArtie4ever 2/21/09 . chapter 1
A great story. very good.
| ready.aim.fire333 1/28/09 . chapter 1
this is a tragic story that was extremely well written. i've always wondered about the man behind the mask, as it were, and i believe your insight of goethe is quite profound. what would their story had been like if they had met in a different time/place? you are gifted writer and i shall definitely read more of your work. great job.
| JustCallMeMarly 1/5/09 . chapter 1
Wow. Powerful insight into a hateful, yet strangely & grotesquely sympathetic character. I was always intrigued by Goeth's portrayal in the movie and wondered at the depth of character that was given to him by Hollywood. Also makes me wonder a bit at what 'might have been' for someone that could be so torn like him if Hilter and Nazi Germany hadn't stepped in. Anyways, enough philosophy. Thanks for posting...
| Strega Triss 7/28/08 . chapter 1
This is a wonderful story. You've really captured something here.