PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE THIS CANNOT BE THE END THIS IS MY FAVORITE ST J/P STORY EVER!

Good job! You're right - it does explain a lot! (And besides how could she resist Tom?)

You can't end them there! Does Kathryn figure it out? What does everyone think? Can't you redeem her at all? She has been awfully mean, let's see her be happy. And poor Chakotay! Though, I did like his changes! Please don't stop!

uhhhhhhhhh (that would be the sound of breath leaving my body). Ow. That broke my heart. Normally I would be defending Kathryn to the ground, but what happens next?

I really liked this. I probably would have liked it more if I was a Star Trek fan...and if I read the rest of your stories. I only read this because I saw it on the random fic. Anyway, good story, and keep writing!

Love this! This is wonderful.

Very angsty! Sad for Chakotay, but I like hearing about Tom and the Capt. together

SAD!

It's interesting. Not what I thought. The Captain comes off as selfish and y though. But it's interesting.