"Daughter, charge, little girl..."
"Kidnappee"

YES. SO VERY YES.

xD I truly pity the principal. SHe'd just indirectly organised a get-together in her office xD

Hysterically funny with a hint of family warmth :)

That poor principal... and I always knew Marlene was evil. Haha, imagine having all of those people in the same room with an ordinary person. How stunned would you be? Brilliant!

VIOLENCE IS WRONG
hahahaha Now I'm goign to shout that...all the time

PMSL! omg, i dont think i have laughed so hard in ages! this is awesome!

this made me laugh SO much! I this is like a day after I read it, but fanfiction was screwing up so I couldn't leave a review. I made a note to myself to remember to do it because it was so damn funny!

The principal should have been more careful...(crap this is aggrevating the stitch in my side from earlier)

Hi Buckle,

First off, I can't believe how much your story made me laugh. It flowed so well and I often found myself silently agreeing with all the reactions. Never has a fanfiction made me laugh and giggle so much.
Second, I think that this story could be improved, I'm not saying it's bad, just that it could be re-thought and re-written. You could make it longer, add more chapters.
E.g. other times that sweet Marlenee bedazzled her school with outrageous incidents.
The introductions of the members of AVALANCHE, I thought could be longer, more impressive and more description. Each character should be allowed to have at least a few lines of dialogue so that the reader knows that the character is completely involved.
You managed to keep the characters in character throughout the whole story, which very few people have managed to do.

Thats all I can think of. I try not to be negative as I find that does nothing for a writers confidence. So, I hope you continue to write and hope you find my review helpful.

Good Luck

FiraTheTyantian

XD I laughed SO hard, you have no idea.

That was so funny, espically Reno's "Kidnappee."
It was also really cute! I loved it, espically Marlene just being so used to it!
Awesome!

I loved this! The whole idea of Avalance coming to Marlene's "rescue" had me giggling. I can't help but wonder though, what exactly did that little bully say to her?

I can't acctually review properly cause I'm laughing too hard! I loved this so much. By the end of it, I was almost expected Sephiroth to turn up. Seriously. But anyhoo, this was great. And my cousin, also in the room on the floor laughing loved it too. See ya!

this is HILARIUS! great job.

LOL. That was hysterical! Especially if you consider this is actually how Marlene lives her life. It was perfectly written, in character, and i loved it. My only critique is the uses of G@@damn might be too strong for a "K+" story. Other then that, great job!

LOL! I loved this, awesome job! :D

Tori