a very good funny story

Terrific. I still curse myself for not including Brian and Tracy in "Brian's Easter". They are such good characters.

Wow that was really good, you wrote that very well considering it was a more serious version however it seems to allow authors to write a bit more in depth and though I've never seen Dylan in any episodes I've watched, you seemed to have developed the characters well.

Nice job on the story. It's good to see a serious approach to Family Guy, as most stories here do seem to be humorous approaches. You're descriptions are good. The only problems I see are a few spelling errors and a lot of double-question-marks. I'd reccomend keeping it to one question mark.

This is very sweet and well written, great job!

This is so sweet, very well written, great job!!