@_@ Wow. Loved the story. Read it in basically one sitting.

I was sad about all the character deaths, but I'm glad that in the end, everything kinda turned out. I'm going to guess from the ending that Roxas got Colin back. I actually find his name funny, I mean compared to his fathers names. XD It sounds so.. normal? Haha.

Awesome job.

i cried like a thousand times, im sorry i didnt catch the story while it was being wrote!

Oh my God! I read this story on FictionPress and i loved it! It's great with Roxas and Axel too. It totally fits! Yay!

The ending is beautiful. I don't have any other words to say other than it's a beautiful story. And you know how to write perfectly.

“He was not your mate, correct?” Arlen asked.

“No.” Zexion pushed several stray hairs out of his eyes. “I went behind Halen’s back.

I think 'Halen' was meant to say Saix.
But a great story, really inspiring. :)
I was hooked from start to finish! :D

Cool story, I also read the exact same version on (except there were different people)

Wow... There's just... So many things I wanna say. For one, this is one of the most interesting plot lines I've ever encountered. And the way the characters grew, that was great. I cried alot! That's for sure. There were alot of mistakes, but I'm not gonna go into that. You said you were already on it after all. There's alot more I wanna say, but my mind is kinda dazed. I'll just say thank you so much for this wonderful piece! I look foreward to seeing more of your work!

omfg that was amazing! i couldnt stop reading it great job, i loved teh ending

lol this is great, alren and reno, wow, i was wondering what had happened to sora in all this mix, where is he anyway??

AH DEMYX IS DEAD! DD':

AH ** MANSEX SHOT DEMYX! DD:<

Huh. Well then. It seems that getting high on David Bowie has gotten me in the mood to finally (f'ing /finally/) review for this last chapter.

Rebel rebel, your face is a mess!something something You got your mother in a whirl; 'cuz she's not sure if you're a boy or a girl, something something something HOT TRAMP, I love you so!

just listening to him sing makes me want to bang him. So uh, /who's hair does Rian have!?!?/ XD I was so disappointed in not knowing when I read this like two months ago. Oh, and I don't care how you and everyone else pronounces it, I pronounce his name Ryan. XD Other than that (I forgot his eye color too ;A;) the whole 'hur hur Reno is my dad'-Roxas thing totally threw me off. I was expecting, like... well I don't know. You sure they got Colin back? Because I'm pretty sure I went and adopted him myself as soon as he was put up. He sleeps on my cat. ._. oh and there's a typo in there. 'you know that's now how we do things here' it's... near the end-ish. Oh, oh, and there's another 'Halen' in there instead of Saix. It's near the end too. When Arlen gives Zex-o his jacket.

Damn straight, Vacne -scowl- he's got Reno's flinging eyes. :l alrighty I'm done. I have to go alert 'Burn' because for some reason I haven't already...

back in Suffragette city! uh WAM BAM THANK YOU MA'AM!! (Let's dance!) Put on your red shoes and dance! (let's sway!) something something something... CH-CH-CHANGES! Time may change me, but you can't this time... We can be heroes; just for one day! We can be us! Just for one day...

totaly awesome! i havent read somthing this good in a long time! there was moments you laughed at some you cryed at and some wtf that just didnt happen moments. ether way great writting! oh and great music!

Hi again! Still loving the story, still having some comments.

First off, I forgot to ask in chapter 9, I know it's supposed to add Drama to the story, but as long as Zexion's reproducing, which was kinda the point, what does it matter who's kid it is?

Second, genetics, sorry. Colin would not have hair that was the combined colors of his parents. He could have blond OR red hair, or a haircolor that matched an ancestor, such as a grandparent or great grandparent. So, if eihter Roxas or Axel are descended from strawberry-blonde people, you're fine. If not, I'm sorry, but no.

More genetics that could be excused as Sephiroth being a moron: I know Axel is not a bearer, but even if he was descended from a son who was not a bearer, he is STILL descended from Hayden and Haoru, who were both Bearers. Therefor, even though he is not, he has the CAPABILITY of being a Bearer.

(Please don't think me rude for pointing these things out, I'm just trying to help you improve.)

Hi!

First, I love this story!

Second, a little note to help you improve!

1) I could be wrong, but I'm pretty sure newborns do not produce actual tears
2) (And this one I know I'm not wrong about) All caucasion babies are born with pale blue eyes, because the pigment that would turn their eyes other colors needs light to work. Therefor, Colin's eyes would not be green yet.