That was hot... It's nice to have rough Edward for a change... that part bout Bella cheating is not my cup of tea, but great still...

Great one shot. Hot and dark and I like how you tied up the loose ends with Jake. Thank God, Edward finally grew a pair and claimed his wife!

That was kinda cool.

Awesome, pure and simple :)

that was completely amazing!

This is an amazingly fantabulous story. VERY VERY VERY HOT!

wow that was awesome

this is only me second story i've read on here. but im adding it to my favs so i can read it all the time! i love it!

Haha.
GO EDWARD!

It's great!

this was good

i love the dominating Edward!

It's twisted, but I like it.
Very very twisted, but still quite good. I don't even think there were any grammar mistakes, so good on you!

wow! that was great!

I always liked dominate Edward.