wow.. another wonderful story. You really have a great talent in writing.. please don't ever stop. Fabulous truly Fabulous

that was freaking amazing. a hundred out of a ten for you. i love the way you describe how samus feels about kissing. m you actually made zelda stick to her wisdom instead of making her an adorable naive country girl...well princess is more like it.

anyways, perfect job :D

AW! THANK YOU FOR PUTTING SOMETHING LIKE THIS UP! idk why, but i've always been into SamusXZelda. ^^

Very nice. I like this a lot. It different that how I characterize Samus but I could easily picture her this way. I really like her contemplative mood during the ride there, and how she thinks over her life.

You might want to go over this and proof read it a few times or get someone to do it for you, because there were a handful of mistakes.