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Reviews for: Grandpa Happosai
glazedlookineyes101
2005-02-06 . chapter 1
That was really funny! Makes a lot of sense too. How come you did not continue this though. It would make a really good humor fic if you add more details like how does Ranma pass the Manliness crash course and what're the fiancee's reactions to it.
Nobody Special
2004-10-14 . chapter 1
That was pretty funny. I know it's been years since you wrote this, but please update this. It has potential to be a really great fic.
HomerNet
2003-10-13 . chapter 1
Cute little vignette, but lacking a bit in substance. Perhaps more effort put into narrative, as opposed to forcing the reader to construct the story in their head around the dialogue.
kungfool (not logged in)
2002-10-24 . chapter 1
hmmm good fic
not entirly sure what a spamfic is
good for if i want a laugh
actully happosai has a granddaughter if u look in the manga when happosia used the 'moxibustion of ultamite weakness' on ranma
Mario AKA MNM
2002-05-10 . chapter 1
Now THIS tells me A LOT about Nodoka and
her outlook on life. SHE REALLY NEEDS HELP!!!!


POOR RANMA!!!!!!!!!!!
Gale
2001-11-30 . chapter 1
Keep this up, sounds promising
fellow melakan
2001-11-07 . chapter 1
AAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *snort snort*
short and sweet. haha!

:) hey, not bad arr, lost boy. it was funny. and it had your typical style of narration. could almost hear your voice telling the story...

errr... but no character development?? no descriptive detail??? hmm... not that i really wanted the details of the Anything goes Glomp Attack. i thot that would have rightfully come from the Joketsuzoku School of Affectionate Expression actually... hmm.

well. see you around LSE!
gourrina_chan
2001-11-04 . chapter 1
this is great hipposai as ranma grand father I wonder if you are going to write the next chapter. Please explain how genma pass Nodoka manliness test!
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