Why is Momo acting CRAZY?!
Toushirou was there bedridden and she wouldn't even believe in him!
I wish that Tobiume and Momo will have a little talk.Tobiume need to wake Momo from her living nightmare!
Toushirou,please get well soon.^_^

Please update soon, I cant wait for the romance to happen.

good job! please update asap, make her appologize for everything, and let the LOVE begin! thanks!

PS> LONG LIVE HITSUHINA! ^^

XD

The wall is plotting something...

Love it!

Let me guess... Hitsugaya escapes into the drinking party?

Good long chapter! Too bad about the romance... I like angst better.

So tragic but you write well:)

I want to cry,I want to but I can't!
Why is Momo not opening her eyes to the truth that's just infront of her?Why is Toushirou so stiff?
If I were him,I'll probably cry until I can't cry anymore.Well,being Toushirou himself,it's just like he don't know how to cry.
I'll wait for the next.I promise.^_^

NYAH! this chapter=EPIC! that's right, EPIC in all caps! *tackle glomps it oh so happily*

seriously... you make me love you so many times this chapter... *inserts many dreamy sighs*. my favoritest chapter yet... ^^

you start off by making me like kira again... (it's a very strange sensation for me, since i usually don't respect him, like, at all...) and then plant this /suspicion/... that... that maybe something or some/one/ has messed with hinamori's head... *ponders* it's so diabolically awesome, i wish i'd thought of it... *grins*.

and then the wonderfully brilliant, eerily beautiful hitsu-whumpage... *more dreamy sighs*. me loves it dearly. no seriously, you just keep getting better at it... *more tackles*. ^^

more pondering of the changes in momo... i really do wonder... of course, it could so easily go either way... we just don't know... *burns with curiosity*

and the hina-angst! me loves angst... she's so loyal, she even ignores the calls of her zanpakutou... she's got to go crazy before she can realize the truth... *nods sagely*. ^^

and then my favorite... well, next to the whumpage anyway... hitsu-angst... *stares at screen lovingly*. he's so sad... but he loves her so much... i just want to cuddle the poor darling! *tackles happily* ^^

and you end it with that wonderful line... for her, he'd endure all of it... *grins*

more mystery! oh, i /so/ can't wait to see what happens next! though of course, i'm super patient... ^^ until next time! *grins happily* hope you enjoyed all the reviewage... ^^

mou! snack! holy crack!

oh no you /didn't/ hinamori~!

oh wait, she did. lol. bad hinamori, bad! *sniffles* poor hitsuchan...

gah, this coffee's making me twitchy... so sorry if the reviews start to ramble now... lol.

but seriously, i love it when hitsu and hina argue... and you make them do it so well! b/c he can't stand her lack of faith and she can't break her faith... they're doomed to clash... and matsumoto! oh, the poor darling... (erm, that was actually in ref. to hinamori...)

and kira! he's the one char. i actually don't really like and you make me like him... go figure... *tilts head and stares at screen* hey, stop giving me ideas! lol. apparently, if i ever get stuck, i just have to bug you for inspiration... ^^

favorite line "and where was your faith in me?"

*dreamy sigh*

off to the next chapter! ^^ then i have class, lol. good thing there's just one left... ^^

muahahahahahahahahahaha! silly toushirou, arguing with your zanpakutou... so epically awesome. ^^ no seriously, i was laughing so hard at his kiddishness... (he has too few of those moments... lol).

anyway. but seriously, i did love that conversation... oh hyourinmaru... *laughs* it makes me want to write/draw hitsuhina again... i've rather missed it. ^^ (though i /have/ started the next chappie of utter chaos...)

i found it interesting that tobiume apparently went through something similar to hinamori... that really is an interesting idea... makes me wonder. how does a spirit become a zanpakutou? can they have past lives like other konpaku? what if tobiume was trying to prevent the past from repeating itself? gah, you inspired me again. lol. dunno if i'll follow up on it though.

i do like the slow degeneration of hinamori's mind... and of course, the focus on the white... that's something of a fascination with me, so i did like that you included it... yum. and yay! a hanatarou moment! he's so adorable... *grins*

and yay! toushi-san wakes up! *grins happily* and of course ran-chan /would/ suffocate him first thing... lol.

NO!

lol. but yeah, hitsugaya totally would. *sigh*. curse his overprotective nature. esp. since we all know it's gonna come back to bite him later. lol. ah well.

on to the next chapter! *grins* ^^

oh, oh OH! so much to say about this chapter! *grins happily*

first of all, i know what you're thinking... where'd nam go? erm... well... real life attacked me... i've barely written a thing since getting back to school... *sweatdrops* and i'm certainly very behind and reading/reviewing all my fave stories... *insert pouty face* but feel special, cuz yours is the first i'm catching up on! lol.

okay, two! wow! like, /dude/! that part where hyourinmaru comes in... with the nifty italics and ice talk? gave me goosebumps! like, seriously... complete with that tingly feeling on my scalp... me loved it. the perfect amount of eerie beauty... i really like how this story is progressing...

no clue how it's really going or where.. but it's certainly interesting... and the way you work the actual episode material in so smoothly is super nice...

and yes, you did improve the grammary stuff, so nice job there! not perfect, but much better... *grins happily*

and matsumoto!! yayness... though i'm terribly curious now... do you favor ran/gin or ran/ren? or is it past ran/gin that changes in ran/ren... cuz i like all of the above... lol. and your renji amuses me greatly... *giggles*. oh renji... *trails off*.

and of course, the part you've been waiting for... the progression of hinamori's thoughts regarding betrayal... i think that's the part a lot of authors, esp. hitsuhina, have trouble with... just b/c it's a sequence she has to go through every time... so i'm really curious to see how that particular aspect progresses in your story... .for right now, i quite like it... it's not too much... but it's not too easy... so we'll see how it goes. ^^

until next chapter! (yeah, cuz it's so far away... lol).

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ouch... poor Toushiro! PLEASE MAKE HINAMORI APPOLOGIZE! I NEED the hitsuhina LOVE here! ah! anyway... you go Toushiro and don't give in no matter what!! HECK YEAH! good chapter and please update ASAP! ^^

Poor Hitsugaya! Momo is really starting to get on my nerves. Thanks for updating! :)

oh, is getting interesting^^

That Chapter was awesome! all the emotion you packed into it was...wow...that's all I can say seriously...please update soon.