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Vegeta767 2008-11-15 . chapter 2
Blitz: Haha, Tairo was glomped!

Siax: Lucky bastard...

Great chapter!
Vegeta767 2008-10-24 . chapter 1
It's me!

Blitz: My race name is going to be changed, but I'm still going to be a Saiyan/Demon.

Anyway, good story...blah, blah, blah...UPDATE GOD DAMMIT! IT'S BEEN FOREVER!
King Golden 2008-07-31 . chapter 1
Haha whats up man, been a while. Yup, we've all gotten older since the good old days lol

I liked the cattle herder scene, a different way of starting instead of diving right into the story... your writing is ALOT better now man, you really polished up your descriptions... the imagery was great. So hyperactive nature is gone? Lol I guess that just reflects how we've all changed since 05. It was a good opener... I'm looking forward to the update LT.
The General of Darkness 2008-07-25 . chapter 1
Oh la-la...nice start. The whole thing with the cattle was good, my friend.

...I'm sorry...I can't resist..

BOW-CHIKA WOW WoW! FOXY FOXY!

...you've been watching too much Naruot. *shifty eyes*

I like the non-hyperactive Taior very much so. ^_^ I'm working on the "GT" half of Roux's life for you as we speak...there's been a lot of character developement in that department.

Five...huh? *counts* Bulla, Trunks, Pan (? quarter saiyan) Gohan, Goten...unless you're somehow reading my mind and know about Tymen...O.o

Anyway, nice start, and yes, you have my okay. :) *makes "pop" sound* ONward! ...btw, have you read Golden's most recent fic. *loves it to death* XD
-DaGeneral
SilverDarkness7 2008-07-25 . chapter 1
Interesting beginning, so Tario's not getting amnesia this time, i presume?

Blitz: Hey, foxy! Foxy mic Fox Fox! Do me a favor, if you find a rampaging saiyan-demon, don't let Pan seal him into a rock.

...you don't exist in that timeline you wonka!

Blitz: ...i knew that! I'm also presuming that's why he didn't mention Earth Saiyan?

...they aren't around yet, you baka! Earth Saiyan are Saiyan's after 500 years of evolution and living on Earth! No tails, less desire to fight, and other things!

Blitz: Yeah, Earth's Population: 40% Saiayn, 40% Human, 5% Demon, 15% Other (Aliens).

Yeah, wait! Why are we talking about my story?

Blitz: Hehe, sorry! Good start LT!

I'm interested to see the rest! I liked the start, about the farmers and the animals and everything. I've just got a question, five haybrids? Let's see: Pan, Bulla, Trunks, Gohan and Goten...ok, what about the pure blood on the planet, Vegeta? I would've done something like this:

"The humans- and five saiya-jin hybrids- wondered what the hell happened and stared at the sky, wondering if this was some kind of sign. Even the pure blooded saiya-jin, Vegeta, was wondering about these signs, even though he didn't give a ** half the time."

...or something like that.

Blitz: (playing 'Naruto: Ninja Destiny' on Silver's DS) You ramble too much!

Anyway, I better end this with my newest signature!

Keep it up!
SilverDarkness7
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