Oh my God.

WHERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER ?

PLEAAASEEEEE I NEED IT RIGHT NOWWW ;-;

hurry up and write more!

omg i'm so glad that i'm not the only person in this world that thinks gotenxtrunks pairings are adorable. i'm going to go to the geocities website right now and check it out. please hurry up and write more. i hate being left in suspense. luv luv luv :)

Come on now! You have to update at least once a year! This is an awsome story! Please get to it!
Kitsune Swift

DAMN YOU! i've been waiting years for you to finish this awesome story! why won't you finish! WAHH! i may not be gay or a guy, but i love Goten and Tru-kun yaoi's! i just can't write one of my own. LOL! plz finish!

Wow

Oh, I like. Add more or I'll send a demon to haunt your dreams. *wink*

Darling, in case you want to know what a sucubus really is, I sugest you finish this story, that will be all... For now...

wow i dont know what to say cept please get nother chapter out soon its kool fic

great fanic i love it

I reveiw foe ch.2 But i was wonderinf what was te home page that you got that pic from! I tryed Sweet Lovely Kiss but it would not work so can you give me thw really site email please and thank you

your fan serena

Hi i really really like your story that you are writing ! Its grate you really have away with words! I hope that you finish it because it is so good! even if you hate DBZ right now will ou please finsh it for the people that have read this great story. please wirte bck if you well finish it or not.

Your fan,

serena

P.S that pic was cute!1

Hi i really really like your story that you are writing ! Its grate you really have away with words! I hope that you finish it because it is so good! even if you hate DBZ right now will ou please finsh it for the people that have read this great story. please wirte bck if you well finish it or not.

Your fan,

serena

P.S that pic was cute!1

Excellent story so far! I can't wait to see where you take it. More please!

i just love dark stories! and this one has the potential for tragedy, and all sorts of twisted stuff. don't you just love manipulating the characters' lives? the prologue was very intense, and even though i realized who was (supposedly) who before the identities were revealed at the end of the chapter, it still added to the effect that you didn't mention it until then. the flashback was just too kawaii and reinforced the notion that these lovers are meant to be together. well, i definitely want to see more to fill in the blanks, so please, keep it coming. just one thing you may want to think about fixing though: torankusu is much shorter than 6 feet tall. he's supposed to be 5'2", about bejiita's height, but it's not something a lot of people realize. but it's not something that's terribly important anyway...