Despite the fact I have never played "Arcana Heart (although I would very much like to play it), this story greatly intrigued me because of how it showed how much the two cared for each other. I certainly wish I could live a life where someone would always care for me. I must admit: this was one of the best stories I've read since...ever!

you are not telling the readers what is happening. it is hard to develope a mental image with so few details. the base of the story is good. however, it does need some serious work.

Wo i love it !

love love love love ir really

specially cuz u putt on this chap. more feeling than other's

(*o*)

wo

There're some parts like:

"Heart was did everything on time, even choosing the right clothes faster than normal "

WOW, i wish to have a gilr like heart, cuz she choose fast the clothes to wear. XD

"The movie finished with the typical lovely cliché ending"

Hehehehe, the typical kiss? XD

that made me laugh

and and and... i liked the clothes that she was wearing wo

n.n

i need more and more of this story

Make the next chap. as fas as u can, yep?

*O*

matta ne

Its cute, please continue

I liked the story!

I'd like to see where it goes next! Update!