Reviews for Kissing Lessons

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Pharaoh Rutin Tutin 2008-08-16 ch 7,	abuseWell . . . I don't think it was ever firmly established in canon that Lary's last name was Possible. So he could be Kim's cousin on her mother's side. That would make Joss and Lary unrelated. So this pairing isn't incesteous. It's just crepy. But if Joss was looking for a guy that was almost NOTHING like her father, she hit the jackpot.
whitem 2008-08-14 ch 7,	abuseJarry? Or Loss? This has pretty much become a "Sick and Wrong Pairing" kind of deal... I will admit though, I sort of guessed this before the end. You know... In some states this might be illegal... Nice misdirection Miss Neo...
Donteatacowman 2008-08-13 ch 4,	abuseLoved this chap! Inspired me to put this on my favorites list... Seems to me the customer was acting just a little bit frugal; wouldn't you agree? (wink, wink, nudge, nudge)
Kwebs 2008-08-11 ch 7,	abuseLOL Once again you made me wish that brain soap is real. LOL Nice twisted little tale Neo.
Anabri 2008-08-11 ch 7,	abuseOh yea, you didn't fool me this time! It took me five chapters (not counting the one I was in), but I finally guessed the wrongsick pairing before it was over! Oh yea! 'AnaBri And I STILL enjoyed it.
Captain IT 2008-08-11 ch 7,	abuseSo ..who up for a game of Everlot?
rufus3000 2008-08-10 ch 7,	abuseHA! I knew it! Called it about halfway! Almost had me pick the wrong guy.
MaceEcam 2008-08-10 ch 7,	abuseEw. EW. EW! Now that I have that out of my system, let me say how good this story was. Knowing YOU, I knew it couldn't be something as simple as Jade, but for someone who hasn't read any of your other stories/chapters this would come as a surprise. As for the delivery of the last line, it was perfect.
TymofeY 2008-08-10 ch 7,	abuseAggr ! cooties!! hehehe xD
screaming phoenix 2008-08-10 ch 7,	abuse"You might be a redneck if you go to family re-unions to pick up women." Jeff Foxworthy Me, I’m giving the old bat a few practice swings.
CajunBear73 2008-08-10 ch 7,	abuseI can't wait for the screaming to end at Kim's place when this introduction ends... You're not the first to pair these two up, but it's a very good take on two folks who don't pay attention at family gatherings. Oy! CB73 'neb you should have known better.
Samurai Crunchbird 2008-08-10 ch 7,	abuseNeo, I like the way you stopped it right at the switch. It was a bit risky; but you pulled it off quite well. It was a little on the short side,yet it was consistent with the rest of the chapters so far. In short, you did a good job once again! Your friend in writing, The Samurai Crunchbird
cpneb 2008-08-10 ch 6,	abuse(cpneb) Neo, you're evil! (Neo) but- (cpneb whispers) shush...I like evil... You are the first person after me that has done a Ron/swap that fooled me until I was far enough into it to catch it. Anabri in one lovely young lady, and I can see why Ron wasn't bothered taking her out...but, Ron, the fell from heaven line? Good form! but, poor Ron fell back into character and went off on his robot mania again, and this time he was left holding the tab... Better luck, next time, Ron, and... for you, Neo, a well-done. The misdirection was handled masterfully, with all the right touches to send the reader down the wrong path. ...cpneb
Anabri 2008-08-09 ch 6,	abuseFirst off, I thank you AGAIN for the insert.] 2nd: If you DO mean 7th or 8th grade (which you probably don't), then that's ironic, since I just started 7th grade yesterday. 3rd: I might be crazy, but I will NOT beat you with this sitck. In fact: Picks stick up I'm gonna break it in half! Snaps stick in half, and places it back in the wild, where a groundhog picks it up, and runs off with it Oh, and don't forget to tell Reger that I'll pay for the tip. They had great windows! 'AnaBri
screaming phoenix 2008-08-09 ch 6,	abusehave been trying to decide the proper punishment to give myself after I continue to read your little tales of strangeness. Scooping my eyes out with a melon scoop seemed a bit harsh, and scrubbing the frontal lobes of my brain with steel wool seemed impractical. So I decided to hit myself on the head with my keyboard rapidly. After the pain subsided I began to wonder why I keep torturing myself like this. I was then reminded of a friend of mine who likes to hit himself in the head with a hammer. When I asked him why he did this, he replied, “Because it feels so good when I stop!” I finally understand him.

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