I really like how you haven't just followed along with the actual plot of 'The Perfect Man'; good use of imagination and creativity. Well done! I also like how you changed the characters round a bit, like Bella being the aunt for example and Lizzi falling in love with her best friend not just some new guy who's helping her out. I can't wait for the next chapter, there's so much drama. I love it! Please please update soon!

Aw! SO CUTE! I love Aaron and Lizzy's relationship! TOO CUTE! UPDATE SOON!

Love the story
Update pretty please!

Uh oh a possible date.
Hope you write more soon.
I have a couple of questions for you that I'm confused about. If you could clear these up I'd really appreciate it.

1. In chapter one Bella has a dog named Jacob. Then in chapter five she doesn't have any pets because of Lizzy's allergies. So my question is what happened to Jacob?

2.In chapter five you say Bella works as a legal secretary but then in chapter seven it says she's a sous chef.

OK is Edward recieving emails too?

Oh! Suspence!

Oh. Tricky.
Will Bella ever really MEET Edward? I want her to...so badly!

PLZ WRITE MORE!! ITZ AWESOME!

Ah I love it. I can't wait for Bella to finally meet the amazing Edward!!
and YAY Lizzie likes Aaron. Hope Aaron really likes her too and that kiss wasn't just a confused dream... :) I'm a sucker for watching people get hurt (that chapter in New Moon makes me cry every time).
Update son :D

woww...complicated...PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!

So CUTE!
I love it truly honestly no lie whatsoever...
I'm caught like a fish on a hook.
Keep up the amazing work.

Yay!
I love it!
write more soon!
:D smiles!
-Gigi

Yeah! It was very good!

That was great! Who could not like Edward? Hello he is always perfect.

Great Job! I can't wait for more of this story.

lyked it. its a diff story plot!!