I vote for a part two :D
Please?
Pretty please?
Ok, I'll dutifully review
I love the detail, it's very original, not to mention I love how you write it from Shin's POV and yet it's not him that's narrating, I just love that xD
Now please write?

Aaw...so kawaii!
:P

o.o I liked this. I wish for a part 2. Couldja do that? It was good to read! It was a pleasure! xD

Damn, that was HOT. Love it. Especially cause well Yankumi... I bet Shin never expected her to do that... Wow... Could we please get a second part? (big puppy eyes) Please. Please?

That's a good, well-written story - I like the "you" point of view of the narrative. It's not done very often. My only objection is that Yankumi is out of character - she would never have allowed things to happen this way with Shin while he was her student. Situate this scene after the graduation special, perhaps? In any case, thanks for writing this ^_^

kyah!a sequel pls. pls...it's really good.very fun to read from shin's perspective!!how i wish it happened just like that in the drama!!uu hoping for another story from you!

Great fic...more.more.more :)

aw woah! brilliant! i love this insight into his mind and the slight twist to the original story line! kudos to you :)
and plus it sent shivers down my spine:D
i say make a 2nd half (or more...ahem ;))! it was fantastic :D
x

Nice! I remember this scene clearly and the part where Shin said 'it's charred' is so chuckle worthy! Please keep this going. I would love to peer into Shin's mind!

Hot.make 2nd shot

aw i like it!
i like how you wrote it
:) great job!
[ ps i would like more. :) ]