This is amazing. Enough said.

awesome story! looking forward to more from you :D

I enjoyed it very much. Though I'm new to the Avatar fandom, I think that you portrayed Azula very well, so Zuko. She is broken and insane but still there's something deep down, little girl Zuko remembers from their past (and scene with Azula trying to learn Zuko's name - beautiful. I always wonder how and when did she create "Zuzu".)
Thank you for sharing this little fanfic. I hope I could have a possibility to read more with Zuko and Azula from you :)

P.S. Sorry for my English - it's not my native language and I'm still learning ^^"

It was nice. I think the inclusion of her time as a child did well to remind us that Azula was not always a conniving, sadistic person. You certainly played well on the title of 'Helpless', and the manacles illustated that further. I don't think the ending was proper though, in that there was no closure, but otherwise, I loved it.

~Koky

That was sad...poor Zuko! It's realistic though, and I enjoyed reading it. We need to watch the finale again :D!

I liked it very much.
I suppose this is a one-shot or are you planning on continuing the story?

Hm, I liked this. O: People like to write about her taking over, but this has her defeated, utterly and completely, and Zuko regretting the need for it. I like that Zuko can still remember her as a child, before their relationship had been poisoned. It's sad, really, to think about what they had been forced to do to each other, and this brings that to light.

The paragraph where he thinks about what their relationships should have and shouldn't have been was good, but the grammar was a bit odd; I can see what you were trying to do, but it wasn't very smooth when you read it. I don't know if the guards would have accents either - I would think they would get men of a higher breed to guard someone as dangerous as Azula - but other than those two points I liked this. Makes me want to write now. Good job~!

yeah, they should have had that scene in the finale!