 Broken Gold 2009-03-02 . chapter 1So well done!
That was so great and wonderful and you're an amazing author, and I'm sorry your going to be receiving SO many reviews, but once I find a good author I tend to read a lot of their work, and your a great author so... yeah.
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 Darren's Wings 2008-08-02 . chapter 1Oh, gosh, I almost cried. This was SO amazing! I would favourite that about eleven times! No, wait, fifty-two! *cough* Right, I'm, reviewing...*shifty eyes*
Anyway, it was amazing. This is definitely one of my top favourite RoseScorpius oneshots, and believe me, I've read a lot of them, haha...
The title really was what got me, though. I wouldn't have read it, even though the summary was awesome, because it's so long, but I just had to read it because of the title. I have no idea why...
So, in conclusion *grins* (I haven't written a review this long in FOREVER), you are a wonderful writer. You show well, your pacing is great, your characters and their actions are believable...The only thing I have to say is that there are a few typos (very few), and I would have liked to see more of what happened with Lily's conversation and Scorpius in the library. Other than that, it was beautiful. Really and truly.
Oh, I wish I could write like you...all my RoseScorpius fics aren't even half as good... *sighs*
Anyway, yes, it was great. I'll shut up now. *grins innocently*
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