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| AlexandraGrace-X 2008-07-29 ch 1,  | abuseaaww cute! X x x Alexandra x x X |
| HSMandChelseaFCfan 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseAww that was cute. I really liked it. Great job! xx |
| xxZanessaxx 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseAww, cute! Great job! |
| danayyyy 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseaww kait that was cute! i like how you and heather used the same names lol. theyre cute names :) |
| ILOVECHADPAYCAUSEOFMADI 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseHAY ASHTON IS A GOOD NAME FYI so gonna name my kid that. loved it |
| GOOOOODDBYEEEEEE 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseaw omg kait that was SO cute! i love troyella baby stories, but more of the pregnancy onces than the actual ones with the baby. great job! |
| RaquelCravinho 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThat as really sweet and cute!! ;) You really did an awesome work with this... I loved everything on it! The cuddling, the way Gabriella told Troy she is pregnant, the names for the baby... So, congratulations! :P |
| dancinluva20 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseaww (: hah sophie and jaden lucas are cute names. Love it kait! oh and they fact that he kissed/touched her stomach is adorable too! |
| Ronsgurl92 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseI don't read a lot of HSM fics, but I liked this. It was really cute. I do have a teensy bit of criticism, but it's more compliment than anything else. This sounds kind of like my writing style on my first 2 or 3 stories (when I had just started out), and I've improved a lot over the past two years that I've been writing (Harry Potter) fanfiction. Because the setting/situation is already so creative, I see a TON of potential here that could be really amazing with practice, so keep writing girl! Oh, and I'm a little surprised, I always thought boy names were easier. If my future husband doesn't mind, at 16 I already know what I'm going to name my son: Cody Matthew; and I have no idea what to name my girl, but I like all the names you picked! |
| liv3.in.lov3 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseAw that was cute and sweet. |
| ThiaRyan 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseplease carry on this story!! i really wana see what troy and gabriella would actully end up naming the baby!! personally i like Ava because my aunty had twin girls called Ava and Grace and there adorable!! i bet troy would be over protective!! haha love you Thia xoxo |
| erin 2008-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abusesafj;l amazing! now i sleep :D |
| ILuvNick.J.Jonas 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseThat Was 2 Cute |
| dreamer 3097 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abusethis is good |
| QueenLittleMissEvil 2008-07-25 ch 1, | abuseAww! that was too sweet! |