I know Dezba was paying Barricade back, but I hope she gets favors on reserve from Runabout and anyone else who got a scrubbing. And 'Warp should count for two or three- he's huge!
Admittedly, considering the catlike behavior, this cleaning strategy would probably not work with Ravage. Maybe a wipe-down with a soft clean cloth?
Btw, would you ever consider coming back to this fic?

Great story...please update it!

To start off, I absolutely love this story. There are a couple of words that I can't figure out (like masticulating), but for the most part, everything is great! All of the characters in this story are believable, and they seem like real people and not mere wishful thinking. One of the elements that I really appreciate, one that is in several of your stories, is you using accurate terminology and acronyms; and then explaining them! This story is great, and it really is too bad that it is unfinished.

And for the record, this chapter, primarily the end, is really cute.

Please Update!

Aww! This chapter was adorable! I love how well thought out this story is. Dezba seems like a very realistic character. I doubt I'd have the mentality to survive the two weeks that she's lived through though. Are her and Thundercracker's relationship going to develope any further? I've read a couple other Transformer fanfics were it HumanxTransformer and I'm just wondering if it will happen in here. TC seems to have have placed her in the spot where his sister once resided, but feelings can change. Oh and TC's hologram is hot... Sorry, minor lapse in fangirl-ism. And the G.I. Joes have made an apperance! This story keeps getting better and better! I do hope you update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Congratulations, you finally made me fall out of my chair, I laughed so hard.

When I get the chance, I am going to read the sequel to this, as well as some of your other stories. "Crosswinds" was how I first found you (and I'm eagerly awaiting chapter 21) and I really enjoy your writing style (that and your depiction/use of the Seekers).

Keep them coming, please!

YES! FINALLY a TFfanfiction writer acknowledges the existence of "Ghosts of Yesterday"!

YESYESYES!

And "Veiled Threat" reveals that Barricade survived Mission City but was killed before ROTF by Prime.

D

I LOVE that parting image. TC is *pissed*.

XD

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Ironhide got PWNED!

Who's Screamer's second? I thought when Megatron was in command, TC was the Air Commander SIC.

(evil cackle)

Why did TC stick with the 'Cons after that?

Chromia? Was that related to Solarflare's death? Did TC think Chromia betrayed them? Or Ironhide so TC felt to repay in kind?

So, when do we get to find out what happened to SolarFlare?

Oooh, are the 'Bots and the 'Cons going to work together?

D

Okay, I love TC. He has a keen optic for appropriate vengeance.

Some of the few things that pass through continuities: do NOT piss off the Hatchet, Starscream hates being called *Screamer* while his subordinates take joy in it, and when the Seekers want revenge...you are FRAGGED.

Was that her stepdad?

Well, will TC manage to convince Screamer?

And the *new* S7 has Debza?

Will Simmons make a comeback and help?