 Shinzonn 9/22/09 . chapter 1I like the idea, alittle fast on the story, but I like it |
 LucyMelissa0600 3/6/09 . chapter 6very good, Can't wait for more . thanks. |
 Vegetto800 1/18/09 . chapter 6I don't want to nit-pick or anything, but I was wondering on why you would put this as complete when it clearly isn't... A very good story I don't want to see go to waste.
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 ibagoalie 11/29/08 . chapter 1 Very fascinating story. I'm curious though, why do they have to beam from the bridge to the ready room..is it not 10 feet away. I have to reread earlier chapters, maybe it is explained. |
 fantasyinmymind 11/28/08 . chapter 5Oh...yes the team is back together with a mystery on their hands. Keep up the good work. |
 Darkness Takes Over 10/26/08 . chapter 4Yay, I'm so glad that you've brought Chatokay and company onto The Aerios. Update soon! This is being added to my faves! |
 Darkness Takes Over 10/26/08 . chapter 3This story is really good and interesting. The plot line is really intriguing and your writing skills are very good. Reading on! |
 fantasyinmymind 10/20/08 . chapter 4Interesting story. Very different direction for the crew. Will look forward to more. |
 Edwina B. Karch 10/12/08 . chapter 4this is a great story, their home but are they? can't wait for another chapter. |
 LynnEGib 10/7/08 . chapter 4I like the crew back together |
 ibagoalie 10/2/08 . chapter 3 Wow, this story is too cool. I really like the robo dog. I am anxiously awaiting new chapters..please? |
 xkawaiix 9/19/08 . chapter 3 Interesting chapter! Strange that they let a pet aboard, but I suppose Captain Scott seems like the person who wouldn't give a crap about regs. I think it would have been more interesting to put some more insight towards the rest of the crew, but you know what you're doing so I won't question you :P
Just a small bit of advice, your summary should say "a distress signal.." instead of an.
I look forward to the next chapter! |
 LynnEGib 9/19/08 . chapter 3Very i8nteresting! A different approach. I look forward to see where you are going with this. My guess they will learn how to prevent this future war |
 greg 9/13/08 . chapter 1 Pretty nice. Reads like a script. |
 xkawaiix 8/26/08 . chapter 2Quite a compelling story! Pretty believable too especially with 'Fleet officers like Starling in the future. You've also got a great grip on the characters, and interesting dialogue between characters in the first and second chapter. My only suggestion to you: it'd be nice to balance out the new characters with the old ones. While I love Captain Scott, I'd like to hear from Janeway and the crew every once in a while - excluding, perhaps, the next few chapters which I assume will focus on Arieos' history and the war. Just consider the suggestion in the future :P
There were a few grammatical errors here and there but they're only small details. This story has great potential, and I look forward to the next chapter! |