If guilt felt anything like that for the rest of us, I'd love to feel guilty all the time. lol

No, really, good chapter. I liked how you described everything. I could feel the awkwardness in the air and the heat as well. You did wonderfully!

Now hurry and make us proud with another chapter! ^^

~!~Aaliyah Higurashi Reborn~!~

I liked chapter two a lot!... and three caught me off guard. I loved both of them && can't wait for your next chappie! ^^

Much Love,
~!~Aaliyah Higurashi Reborn~!~

So sweet! Very good analysis of relationships; it goes deeper than the show could dare can do (as it is a kiddy show).

Ooh, good start. I liked the songs, did you remember them or did you search for them?

Well anyways, I'll be watching for more of your story.

A Big Fan,
~!~Aaliyah Higurashi Reborn~!~

Aw... this is beautiful! Zuko sings is so adorable, a really cute moment, and deep too. First to comment! Yes!!