I thought your story was good, especially the happy ending.

But you might consider removing the random fic, about Sora in an orphanage, from the beginning of your story. I was scratching my head about the incongruity between the first section and the rest of the story but then I realized from reading your profile page that maybe your beta made a mistake while sorting through your fics?

Well anyway, it was such a nice story, perhaps you might consider adding an epilogue of Sora and Riku's life together now that they're finally reunited? :D

I love it! It is such a wonderful story! So sad and happy all at the same time.

Both Riku and Sora can be idots sometimes.

whoa...yesh carry on if u can

o! are you gonna add more, or make a sequeal? cuz that would be awes0me!

HOLY MOTHER FU**ER

so long...

no i havent read it yet but i will... enventually *gulp*

GOOD it really is long...

i no as your friend i have to write good things so i'll just say in advance it's AMAZINGLY AWESOMELY BRILLIANT! (so kol)i no ima awesome with mi superly (hey i can use this in my next review)kol words

OMG.

I usually dislike Sora/Riku, and refuse to read it, but this was just really great and made my day. :D

Thanks.

I have to be perfectly honest I didn't think I was going to like it at first but man did you prove me wrong! I absolutely loved it, the plot, the fluff, the humor especially: "Do you think he saw us?" "Sush, he might hear us." It was simple yet so extremely funny it even brought tears to my eyes XD Keep up the good work! I'll be dropping in on your other stories ;D

This story was funny, well-written, and had an amazing smut scene.

I love Sora's last line the most. XD

It was too sappy and it didn't go fast enough...but, I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT!

8D

OMG that was amazing very light and enjoyable, near the end i thought you were going to leave it with riku leaving but then you made a lovely fluffy ending :)

Nice! I loved it, I definitely found a new favorite. Just enough Angst and Romance to be perfect!

Wow, this is the longest one-shot I ever read or its just one of the longest, I don't know. This was pretty good, but my friend might be mad that I thought of reading a RikuxSora story. She plays the game and I don't, I had to look up most of the characters to get a perfect picture. She seems to find this kind of stuff...not right.

very cute fic

aw so cute

love the ending minxy!

You actually made me cry. When Riku left and Sora was screaming.