Wow. That's... well, sad. I kinda feel down now. Dang.

Hmm, nice writing, though.

i actually liked it.. the last line, when you think about it, kinda sounded funny (if someone hadn't read the whole thing) but it was pretty good

ohh yeah love your idea its the best yeahh an lhave some sexy hott sex scene ahhaha yeahh that will be nice hey i can dream... fer3

even if you didnt write any emotions i wanted to cry.
but i gotta say i think this is far from what's going to happen. but still i feel like crying.
i dont think sasuke wants to destroy konoha either. it's too much of a big decision for him to make on the spot and sasuke is not a rash idiot,he thinks about his decisions, like orochimaru turns out he wanted to kill him all along. so i think sasuke has something up his sleeve, he is not heartless sasuke couldnt even kill those soldiers at orochimaru's you expect him to destroy a village? so what do you think?

This is pretty depressing. I hope you didn't mean Sasuke and Naruto got killed by Madara and Pain in the end; they need to have revenge.

Despite that though, very powerful oneshot and pretty original. I like that you put in the latest manga happenings as well into the story.

Angsty...I really love it though. In a strange way, it was kind of beautiful. I really liked the part where you described Sasuke's reaction to Kakashi's and Sakura's death, and his interaction with Naruto.

Great job!