Wow.
This story is simply wonderful. I have never cried so much while reading a fanfiction, and I couldn't even stop.
I loved it. Especially Chapter 10, where Susan leaves, and Edmund cries. That was so sad.
Thank you for writing this story.

I cried (alot) while reading this. I never, EVER review stories, and even then, it's only if they're truly good or truly bad.

Yours was inspiring, realistic, and touching. I'm so very pleased to have read this. Thank you for this magnificent work. : )

this story is so beautiful. it's how i imagined susan's story continued after the series :) really great job.

I loved it! Thank you so much! Susan needed redemption. That was a great story!

It took me forever to find this again, but it was well worth it. Especially adored the ending. :) So sad yet so happy. :)

Wow! I loved this piece. It was wonderfully done! Bravo!

-Opera

One word. Fantastic. This was an amazingly smooth story possibly better written then some real books I have read. You are extreamly talented this story... it completes what C.S. Lewis started. You made her life in to something more. It really shows Susan as a human.

Everything dies and we are not exempt from that law. The only question is will you be content when you die?

-Anbraxis

I absolutely loved your fic. I must have cried buckets it was soo sad

omg. this was amazing. it brought tears to my eyes...of course it didn't help that i was actually listening to the Chronicles of Narnia soundtrack. Thank you for writing this.

amazing story! the whole thing was great! =]]
just wondering: you said you would post the actual list at the very end. do you still plan to do that?

Excellent story. Well done.

nice ending.

This was a fantastic read. Very moving. Thank you for writing it.

|Meduza|

I don't now where to start... first I am sorry I did not review after each chapter, but I just could not stop reading your story! I started at 11 this morning and it is now 4 in the afternoon and I have been doing nothing but reading your story and crying all the way through, constantly changing between happy and sad tears... It's hard to describe how I love your story it truly is, as someone said before, a piece of art and the ending is just unbelievable, it is simply wonderful and heartbreaking (in a positive way) everything seems so perfect, I'm still crying, because it was such an emotional story! Thank you soo much (I am a little angry with you though, because I should have done homework and you kept me from doing it^^)
I guess I have to drink a few litres of water now, because I am really dried out after all the crying!!
You're great writer and this is the most wonderful story I've ever read!

Thank you for that!

Eighteen Chapters...

Strange that. My first narniafic was eighteen chapters dealing with Susan getting back to Narnia, with the help of her great-granddaughter.

First off, Bravo!

One small nit to pick. In chapter 17, you have the groundskeeper dig out an old cell phone to call about Susan's body. You established this as being late 1980's... Cell phones were very new, very large, and very very expensive. It is unlikely a mere groundskeeper would have one, unless he ran a grounds keeping business and it were his work phone. If he did, it would be about as big as a mid-sized purse that a woman might carry, complete with shoulder-strap and bag.

Only one thing I can think of that might have made the ending more complete... Her Parents, Husband and Joseph should have been on that hillside as well. For as you so eloquently put it. All worlds are one as are all the stories.

HMM