 Marmie1955 3/22/10 . chapter 1Oh my. Major Ezra angst. Painful even. Hope there is more to this. Loved it. Marmie |
 Tidmag 4/10/03 . chapter 1 This story doesn't seem complete without the final confrontation between Standish and his teammates. It could be a silent thing, or it could be an overly apologetic themed reaction, but it doesn't seem complete without something dealing with Ezra and the rest after they left him be without checking on him.
Good story otherwise.
Though spaces between paragraphs would be a nice addition. |
 Kimber 6/13/02 . chapter 1 Any chance of a sequal...how does Ezra react when Chris walks in the door? How will he be with the others when they are discharged? Will Vin beat the shit out of the uninjured ones for not checking on the undercover agent...will JD yell at Buck for not thinking about Ezra, since him and Vin was in the same room, that either Chris or Buck could have went to check on him...oh some much angst here. To have Ezra be defended would make the southerner take notice to having friends that cared about him...PLEASE |
 Hermeticia Smythe 1/31/02 . chapter 1Marvellous story. I loved how you decided who was injured. All those who would be likely to think of and care that Ezra was also hurt were injured themselves while those who barely tolerate his presence a lot of the time are the uninjured.
The story cries out for a sequal. Going to be great hearing how Chris, Buck and Nat justify letting Ezra wake up alone.
Hmm his monitor is switched off. Would serve them right if the thought the sleeping Ezra was dead. |
 Anna 12/17/01 . chapter 1 Wow! What a tearjerker! Loved it! Need a sequel! You've gotta fix this! Make everyone say sorry and stuff and get this friendship thing back in working order! Please? |
 foggynite 12/11/01 . chapter 1ahhhhh... that was a nice fix of ezra-angst. i love your stories and i figured, since i keep coming back to them, i should probably leave a review, eh? let's see, beautiful imagery. have you been hospitalized before? you've got the atmosphere down pat :) the part where ezra was lamenting not sitting next to his friends before now was a great piece of angst, but got a bit redundant for a few lines. i like the josiah/vin indignation and anger. nathan's accent was a neat touch. breaking the paragraphs up a little more might make reading easier on the eyes(that's just me though- lines tend to blend together and this is a completely irrelevant comment) overall, i liked the feeling, a very nice mood piece, good introspection. and, of course, i am looking forward to a sequel :) |
 Violette 11/9/01 . chapter 1Good stuff! I'm glad you've joined the ranks of M7-fic-land, especially since you do such a good job with my favorite gambler! Anxiously waiting for more from you! |
 Melissa 11/9/01 . chapter 1 Arrrghh. You can't leave us hanging like this. I need more! Your writing is always excellent and this is no exception. But I have to know the rest of the story, please I need more. |
 Heather 11/8/01 . chapter 1 More, More, More! Good job. |
 amanda 11/5/01 . chapter 1 Great Story!
So when will you be writing the sequel? You have to you know. You can't just
leave us hanging like this. I want to see Nate, Buck and Chrs grovel. |
 amanda 11/5/01 . chapter 1 Great Story!
So when will you be writing the sequel? You have to you know. You can't just
leave us hanging like this. I want to see Nate, Buck and Chrs grovel. |
 Twyla Jane 11/4/01 . chapter 1 A wonderful story but that can't be all surely there's more? Ya can't leave it like that... |