that was good I really liked it

that was really good I liked it great job

It needs A LOT more discription. It's a little short and it is going too fast. When you wrote they kissed, well you wrote the kissing thing too many times that it makes it less romantic. You could discribe it more, more more. And this is from Gabriella's POV ( point of view). Yeah, I don't think high schoolers or brainiacs will talk like that. Tone it down a bit. But overall it's pretty good.
Great job! :)

FanfictionFeedbackgal
* throws confetti*

you suck at writing

Ur a very good writer! I love this story will u continue it?