Oh, I totally agree about Fleur's accent being hard to write. But you did it well :)
Great fic, not too sappy.

I know what you mean about Fleur's accent, it's annoying to write. But I think you got it right, and this story was a wonderful piece. I don't read a lot of Bill/Fleur, though I love them, but I think this captured their personalities brilliantly (or as much as you can, considering how minor they were).

Fantastic job, as per usual =D

Loved it.

A bit sappy but otherwise very cute.
Fleur's accent is spot on, at least from my point of view.

I thought it was great! I'm woring on a Bill/Fleur story right now, and I don't know any French at all. I have to ask my little sister. And then I get it confused with spanish.lol
It was a superb story! Keep writing. :D
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That was really nice. I loved it.

You got Fleur's accent down to a point. I speak french and I think just that one line "We weel pull through zees, Beel. Togezer" was a bit over done but other whys it was fantabulas! (is that a word?) I loved it.

Absolutely lovely. Fleur's accent was a bit difficult to understand at times, but I definitely think you did excellent with it! (: This was just adorable, and very well-written.

this was a really sweet story, and a little sappy, but that's not necessarily bad. and you got fleur's accent right, which i greatly admire you for. that would be such a pain.

Aw, I liked that! It was the first Fleur fic I've read in like a year, so it was very sweet!

Good story. Not too sappy at all and you got the accent just right! Good job!

You did a great job, especially if English isn't your first language, which it probably isn't if you are from France, as you said. I love Bill's perspective on Paris, and everything. (How he didn't think the Eiffel Tower was all that spectacular, and that he really wanted beer, not wine.) I also love how Fleur comforted her husband in the end. It was a truly brilliant one shot, and congratulations about confronting those sterotypes about French people. I don't believe them, because it is silly to assume that everyone in one culture is the same, still I suppose it is better to be French than American. Americans, like myself, are considered rude, unrefined, arrogant, stupid, and obese in sterotypes. Anyway, you did a great job, and I hope you'll write so more in the future.

How have I missed this before? This made me laugh - I love how Bill is dying for a beer - but it was sweet too. Just brilliant.

AWW! THat was adorable!! I loved how Bill doesn't care about the Eiffel Tower, and all of the cliches that make Fleur angry, and how he wants beer! LOL. Lovely!! Sweet! Great job with Fleur's accent--definitely a pain!

I loved this, and I think you havwe Fleur's accent down perfectly. Very interesting take on this-France through the eyes of a Brit, written by a French person!
Excellent!