ReaperRain 2008-08-15 . chapter 1Jack's a genius, even if he's also pretty frickin' stupid at times.
As per usual, wonderfully done. You really captured both of their personalities with this one. And I loved the way that Jack won, in his own way, especially the 'so there's MY immortality, eh?' line. It's just so...so...Jack!
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YinYangWhiteTiger 2008-08-13 . chapter 1:D EPICNESS! I really like this story! Because Jack may be a moron but he's one hell of a evil,genuis, moron! that nobody can deny XD JACK FUCKIN' PWNED CHASE like he deserved!!
PS: Thank you for no Slash"!! |
Freaku 2008-08-04 . chapter 1dammit!
this is great!
Finally Jack won!
He deserves more love IN THE SHOW! because you know he's the most loved XS character by the fans but in the show he's like a comic relief or something like that! D:
This is a very fair fic! I feel sorry for Chase though (I love the man as well as Jack)
hmm yep, I ask the same question as Black-Rose23 too xD |
Black-Rose23 2008-07-29 . chapter 1Me likey, though I never did quite understand why Jack had Chase's stomach painted yellow in that universe. Maybe it's just me, but what exactly *was* the point of that other than the fact it was humiliating - and probably annoying too? |
dragon of spirits 2008-07-28 . chapter 1Wow, deep. Amazingly written, original plot line, and just plan wowing. I was seriously amazed about how one; you captured the characters personalities so well. Two; you made the words flow beautifully. And three; you came up with something so original that no one else ever though of it. Kudos to you!
I sincerely enjoyed reading this fic and hope to read more fics that you write in the future.
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poesumo 2008-07-28 . chapter 1All I have to say is genius... |
Shadir 2008-07-26 . chapter 1Wow! That was pure wickedness *cackle* |