will gohan goten and trunks have any time at all to actuly talk to goku and vegeta.b before they are sent back to the mortel relm.

let me Guss that last pare Gallic gum is piccolo. great fight chapter by the way. am not board for a minute.you are a really god fan fiction writer.i am glad their are some good writers that haven't left because of their restriction on writing.

very intrresting piccolo and gohans split apart and gohan still knows all tecnecs from whene he was fused with piccolo.i wonder what the wizard will do. will he be a chalange for the 4 fighters. that incluudes piccolo.

i wi=onder if goahn will teach her the ka-me ha-ma-ha.great story so far anf i like how you incorparate things and vilans from the dbz world into your trilagy.

so whene gohan goten trunks and vedel retur to vegeta they will find it deastroyed.i htought broly cared for his peple in this fanfict.iguss he didnt.he deastroyed king kold and freza but also tore up vegetasun.

i wonder if and how broly will deafeat them. im expecting him to pound them to dust. that is how i imagened brolly being if he wernt mad.i wonder whene gohan and the outhers get back to vegetasi. what they will find whaiting for them.

i like the way you incorperate things from the anime in diffrent ways. like the snake quean and the fight with freza.garlic jr was intresting especaly whjen gohan reveled to goten and trunks that he was a supersaiyan.

i hope they catch that wizared and make him pay.i wonder how gohon will explain being a supersaiyan to vedel.i wonder why he didn tell her erlyer.good trilagy so far keap up the good work. i wonder if gohan will teach goten and trunks to become supersaiyans.

i like the concept of a ship within a ship but its a planet ship. i wonder if goten and trunks will ask gohan how he got to be a supersaiyan. i relly like your story so far keap up the good writing.

i wonder hoo knoked them out did they get telaported to the planet. what purpuse are they on the planet for.

i find it very interesting that gohan was the one that helpet ghis brother out.it makes perfect cence.picoolo is a part of him now that he would be able to do that.

i wonder whats going to happen next. now that their arn nameks that are alive.how did gohan recover will you explain that.

i wonder hoo the attackers are and what happens to goten trunks and Vidal.i wonder how gohan will react when he friends out that they have a human with them.

im thinking that is gohan or mabe its piccolo in gohans body.bouth of them fused together should be anble to beat friza.as far as i know he cannot beat a supersaiyan.

i hope gote4n can back up his words. if its ofne thing i have lerned is they have never backed down from a fight.