Really love the plot, please continue this! I see you haven't updated in awhile, please don't quit this I want to see what happens! *gets on knees and begs* PLEASE update!

o! the plot thickens!

this is fantastic i can't wait to see what you have planned

i really wont to know whats going to happen to rose and micky.

aww. i had hope when jack came along and then they just get captured again and my hope was demolished, so sad.

wow!
the plot bunnies deffiatly won that one i think!
omg! i wonder what's happening...
don't be too long keeping me in suspense!
can't wait to read more!
xx

Well, I don't know what happened to my last review but I can assure you that it was more than three words, lol. So here's the cliff notes version:

The quote, made me aww for three weeks, lol. I loved the relationship between Jack and the Doctor and how they take care of Rose. And your plot, the saddness of those poor people on this planet, brilliant. Also, the fluff was wonderful. Loved it! :D

another brilliant update!

personally, i think the bit of plot you had in there was fantastic, and the fluff wasn't to... y'know... fluffy... lol
it was all just right.

god, i hope that made sense. don't worry about trying to interpret that if it didn't... you will be there for far to long!

anyway...
keep up the great work and don't be long uploading the next chapter!
xx

yay a little bit of fluffiness in this chapter. an't wait to read more.

"I am now"

awsome story. can't wait to read more. is rose going to find out about bad wolf by any chance?

Oh, a cliffhanger. I do love a good cliffhanger. It's not Martha is it? The screaming I mean? *Attempts to look innocent*

I really enjoyed this update, and you're very welcome for the review, I'm enjoying it. I like how it's different from what we saw, and I like that you're keeping Rose away from Doctor Two. Granted, I like the boy, but sometimes I just wish...things had gone differently, lol.

Speaking of Rose, poor lass - she's gonna be fairly upset, I imagine, when she finds out the truth about Jack. Loved the scenes between her and Jack, btw. And then her and the Doctor, with the toaster - very cute.

Again, the characters are perfect and I look forward to see where you take this :)

really good update!

i'm liking what you're doing with this,
can't wait to see what happens next!

really good!

i really hope you are planning to continue this
you have a really good storyline here and i think you could make this amazingly brilliant!

please update it!!
xx

*Grumbles* So my first review got me a "Cannot Find Server" so if you get two of these (coz cleverly I copied and pasted) I do apologise:

O, now that was rather good. I like the idea of this adventure, instead of the Doctor just returning everyone to where they belong. (Well, in the case of Rose, he didn't return her to where she belongs...god, how I'll miss her). I think you've got the main characters that we saw down to a tee.

Jack, cheeky and flirty. Donna, concerned and noisy. Rose, concerned, brave and in love. Mickey - brave. And of course, Doctor Two - a little dangerous.

I can't wait to see where you take this, and what you do with Rose and the Doctor, coz well, I'm a sucker for that ship :D I shall continue to read if you continue to update.

And go on, make a mention to Rose's fabulous eyeliner. You know you want to *Is obsessed - she knows, lol* :p