Love it, Jake's Rose's parole officer. Cute story.

~Cat

Well, Mrs. Long has some bite to her XD

~Cat

Love Spud, he's so funny. Also, very much enjoying the Killdragonosa last name. Very obvious yet entertaining. I laugh each time.

~Cat

Oh my, I had completely forgotten about Rose's brief time on television. I like that you decided to go with this idea.

~Cat

This is getting interesting keep it up.

It looks like you've really fleshed Susan out.Great job!Update soon.

LP

Good story now add some adventure like jake use his shapehifting powers and changes into rose and the real rose is in a safe place so he can go undercover to she what the bad people are doing aka huntsclan!

good chapter.

Keep it up this is good!

Well,Jake finally did it.Too bad it doesn't seem to have very good consequences. Update when you can.

This is interesting so far keep it up.

Good chapter. Hopefully they sentence him to life in prison. Oh well. We'll see what happens. Update when you can. Peace

Good story. I have no idea about the penaties question, but I'm going to say The Three Stooges for the second one. In one of teir shorts they did that gag when Moe said, "Order, order" and Larry replied, "I'll have a steak and french fries". As for Rose, she may need to be deproggrammed if all else fails. Hopefully, her family will be able to get her off her kill dragon's kick. I loved the Huntsman's name. Very clever, and funny. Keep up the ggood work. Peace

LOL! I just started reading this a little while ago and so far I like it. Please write more soon, this is a very good story. Plus the cheeseburger thing was very funny ^_^.

This is an interesting story.A little OOC,but I like alternative takes on stories.Update when you can.