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Reviews for: Avatar: New Airbenders
irsa
2009-01-14 . chapter 1
you cant just leave it there!...carry on.
LorneStar
2008-07-31 . chapter 1
this is about what I hope for Book 4, AIR
:) not that i expect they'll make it...but i can hope!
kaibasgirlx
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
Well, I don't have much to say about this, except for one thing:

WTH is this listed under "Aang & Toph"? This is clearly Kataang, not Taang, so why did you list Aang and Toph under the 'characters' section? Because that's extremely misleading, and very annoying.

Other than that, a sweet ending, though I highly disagree with your portrayal of Azula. Also, she's in a mental institution on a private island, not in prison.

~Téa
Cynic the Supercritic
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
This is a nice story, with few mistakes. For example, Bumi is how you spell his name. And there were a couple of grammatical errors. However, there's one fundamental flaw with your story that pretty much breaks it off from canon.

The Air Nomads were composed entirely of benders. When they were wiped out, they were completely wiped out.
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