 kaibasgirlx 2008-07-26 . chapter 1Well, I don't have much to say about this, except for one thing:
WTH is this listed under "Aang & Toph"? This is clearly Kataang, not Taang, so why did you list Aang and Toph under the 'characters' section? Because that's extremely misleading, and very annoying.
Other than that, a sweet ending, though I highly disagree with your portrayal of Azula. Also, she's in a mental institution on a private island, not in prison.
~Téa |
 Cynic the Supercritic 2008-07-26 . chapter 1This is a nice story, with few mistakes. For example, Bumi is how you spell his name. And there were a couple of grammatical errors. However, there's one fundamental flaw with your story that pretty much breaks it off from canon.
The Air Nomads were composed entirely of benders. When they were wiped out, they were completely wiped out. |