Another masterpiece of yours ^^ I'm glad I left this for reading later, since I was having a little slump in my Ranma obsession and this story of yours got me back on my RanAk-obsessive feet ^-^ Thanks for that.

Heard about your current condition on your site, by the way. I sincerely hope you get stronger and recover soon.

Best Wishes,
Mo

aw, that was so cute! I really liked this story. It was well written and had a great plot. Truthfully, Shampoo and Cologne got what they deserved. Thank you for giving me such a wonderful piece of literature to read. It was worth it. :D

hehehe, I love that! The end of this chapter was superb, to the extreme!

another two dozen, think they could have gone any more over kill on the guards? funny though... :D

hehehehe, I think I like Lotion...! That was hilarious!

utoh, I guess he fell for their trap after all!

creepy... I never like Cologne or the creepy old man either... oh well can't wait to see how the plot unfolds.

I'm not familiar with the term "pejorative". Is it the same as "Derragatory"?

*smiles happily* that was a good tale.*chuckles* you gave quite a few lil hints on what Akane would do in the fight with Shampoo and normally I'm great with subtle hints but this one scurried under my guard. Thank you for the entetaining read!

I knew it! Iknew it! *dances happy dance* Go Lotion! *evil grin* Akane is gonna get them!

Wonderful story! Read it all in one sitting (my eyes hurt now but it was worth it). I loved that you encompassed many emotions--depression, worry, sadness, exhilaration, anger, fighting adrenaline, happiness--and it made for such a good plot too! Very funny in parts, very sweet in others. Very gripping story!

Good God!! \0_0/ Non-Asshole Genma!

Once again, a really good story with an excellent ending, and you managed to, for the most part, keep characters fairly in character. Excellent, loved it!

A good read. Good characterisation, good extrapolation, and some nice moments. A little painful an ending compared to the rest but Ukyo really is a hard character to keep upbeat around unless palmed off into a new love.

A great story all round. Thank you.

A nice wrap up and great to see Jasmine get some more lines. A little talky killing the romance of the wedding night. But all in all another great chapter.