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| mysterypoet66 2008-08-17 ch 4, | abuseThat turned out really beautifully. The entire set was voiced so cleanly, and structured so simply. Really balanced cuts in the pov's, and scene setups. Lovely. |
| Unsolved 2008-07-27 ch 4, anon. | abuseWhat a great ending. Although not one to be greedy, but will there be a sequel ( Crossing Fingers). I love how you put in the missing pieces, good job. Well looking forward to reading more from you. Keep up the good work and Keep them coming. |
| WickedWitchoftheSE 2008-07-27 ch 4, | abuseaw, poor Ianto. makes me want to cry and hug him and help him forget all at once. maybe he should've just taken retcon...sadness. |
| WickedWitchoftheSE 2008-07-27 ch 2, | abuseaw, that made me want to cry. great job, I can't wait for more! |
| rabidcrazygirl 2008-07-27 ch 1, | abusei LOVE this! it's so cute! i love ianto's father and how he's like the ianto of the past. |
| Le Cosmonaute 2008-07-27 ch 2, | abuseThe origin of Ianto's coffee! Wonderful take on things. Ianto's past is done very well. |
| nicky-hb 2008-07-27 ch 2, | abuseThat was brilliant. It actually made me cry a little there at the end and I don't think I've ever cried reading fan fiction before. Loved it. |
| mysterypoet66 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseThe narrative is delightful, and you've extrapolated the backstory so seamlessly...I'm really interested in what the next step will be. |
| Unsolved 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseSo 3 more times, we have encounters with Jack and Ianto, I love it. This was a great chapter, can't wait to see what else comes :) Keep up the good work and Keep them coming. |
| Le Cosmonaute 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseAww, an adorable mini-Ianto! Very nice. |
| geekchic79 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abusea really clever idea x |
| gaia-x-goddess 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseLovced it, can't wait for the next chapter(s) |