|Reviews for A Taste of Heaven|
| Enrica of The Tay's 9/15/09 . chapter 3
In this chapter... I don like the fact that Hermione feels inferior because of her appearance... . She should learn how to love herself... Not falling into self despair just because of some other brainless girls who only know how to drool and spread their legs in front of Draco... ,
My oh MY... DRACO MALFOY! GET YOUR DESIRES AND WILLS CLEAR O PLUUEASE you're not a 7 year old anymore... .
| Enrica of The Tay's 9/15/09 . chapter 2
Hm... honestly i have some opinions for this fic... For your info, I've been following this since Chapter One... I really like your story... But there are some parts that are intolerable(for me)... .
First of all... i don like the fact that Hermione is SOO not herself in this fiction... I mean... I wan to see more of the head strong know-it-all who sticks her wand up to the throat of anyone that gets in her way... But in this fic... ALL i see is a LOVE-SICK, helpless Girl who're so obsessed with Draco(That she's STUPID)...
She cant even come up with a 'bitchy' enough(as in smart & sophisticated) payback when Draco and even Ginny did her BAD... I mean... Common' there's gotta be a limit in one's patience... and the Hermione we all know isn't the kind of person who'll just swallow it down... .
And the WORST part is... Her GRADES slip OMG! i can't even picture that! this is NOT NOT NOT the Know-it-all bookworm Hermione anymore... The Hermione we all know WONT(in a million years) let her grades slip... These are what make Hermione... well.. Hermione? o.O
Hm... Basically... all i wanna say is that... i wanna see the COMEBACK of the 'REAL' Hermione... not the lovesick and obsessed stupid girl... . Sorry... if i overreacted...
BUT I REALLY wanna see the smart(& cunning) Hermione... who'll throw clever and devilish feat at Draco to GET his attention back, seduce him with her own unique charm(& play along with his LOVE GAME)...XD Not acting like a helpless & Desperate heart-broken silly girl... .
I like how u present Hermione's emotion and all... but the way her emotions take control of her... and manipulate her actions... are just too much... .
Credits To you for making Draco as sexy and 'bad-boy' as ever! XD I like it when Draco seems to be always hiding sth... It's very tempting... Makes me wanna explore more... XD
Ginny's a bitch(cunt)... Statement cleared! XP
And BTW... THESE are MERELY my own opinions... I don mean to be offensive or anything... Shut me up if i go over the border... Hope you'll update soon! XD I'll still be following this story...
| iambelle 9/15/09 . chapter 7
i love ur u update soon! what a cliffee!
| Enrica of The Tay's 9/14/09 . chapter 7
GOSH! O.O What's happening to Hermione? Please Update ASAP
| Jacquig 9/14/09 . chapter 7
Oh please please please update soon. Power imprinting indeed! You gotta tell us what that means. Was that really Draco? It wasn't someone polyjuiced as Draco was it? Cuz that would just suck. Love the story so far.
| Because Love is WAY Over-rated 9/13/09 . chapter 7
Ah what an evil way to end a chapter after having not updated in so long :( I do hope that you'll update sooner this time!
| vampiregurl 9/13/09 . chapter 7
power imprinting? like wolves imprinting or veela? a bit confused but i can't wait to know more. was it really draco with her last night? i hope so. hehehe. great update btw. pls update soon :)
| MayGirl85 9/13/09 . chapter 7
i REALLY hope she gives him hell. He had to screw with every girl in sight AND HUMILIATE hermione just to 'be sure'? thats crap. Where's blaise? Gimme some blaise cos I really hate when a character needs to break someone else's heart because they are too scared or unsure or whatever.
| earthbound68 9/13/09 . chapter 7
This story is SO sad! I am a blubbering fool for Hermione here. So okay - what is power imprinting?
| GeekNerd 9/13/09 . chapter 7
Really good story. Update faster, and i love the whole mystery thing, and i know the confusion will clear out later. :] But, i don't like how she's like really obsessed with Draco, it just seems like that. I still really like it though, Good luck!
| MrsEdwardCullen13 9/13/09 . chapter 7
That was crazy! Lol! When is the lovely couple finally going to get together? Draco needs to ditch Ginny and go for Hermione already. Lol! Great job and please update soon. :D
| LondonLi 9/13/09 . chapter 7
I'm so glad for an update but I have no idea what's going on! Can't wait for another new chapter!
| Dia.G.onally 9/9/09 . chapter 6
how you break my heart... i could feel the bile in my throat when hermione though of Draco with a pregnant Ginny. and you left this here? Please continue, for Merlin's sake, if not mine!
| Dia.G.onally 9/9/09 . chapter 3
oh... i ached for her... been there, felt that. you depicted her insecurities so well!
| Dia.G.onally 9/9/09 . chapter 2
well constructed ... except for a few sentences here n there. the characters are very believable and i feel Hermione's pain. poor girl.