nice story

wonderful

I started reading your story based on the title-thought I was reading a a light story about Edward doing sexy, romantic, things to win Bella's heart. I stayed reading because you write extremely well and created characters I cared about. Thanks for writing this story.

this is an amazing story. love the plot and the ending.

Just wanted to say that I thought this was an amazing chapter. Not necessarily the world-through-rose-colored-glasses kind of conversation that usually seems to happen in romance fiction (fanfic or otherwise) but more realistic. I like that Bella, older and wiser of the two in this situation, realizes and clearly communicates that loving each other and meaning well isn't enough for maintaining a healthy relationship. I agree with her that there are other more important issues to deal with in her life at this moment in the fic. Plus, nothing Edward has said in this fic makes me think that if he felt it was justified, he wouldn't do the same things all over again. He seems to get that his reasoning was incorrect, not that what he did was wrong for someone to do in true partnership with another person. Since he keeps issuing lame ultimatums and trying to control Bella's actions thus far in this fic, I don't think he's grown enough to really see what the problem is. Good for Bella holding out until/if he truly gets it.

Firstly I should suggest u change the name of this fanfic coz der was no seducing anyways very goood fanfic der were lots of angst bt I loved how ur story came out Brady story was very sad pooor him bt glad in end his spirit was free n den Bella accident dat lead to edwella having 2nd break up bt atleast Bella didn't end it all glad she jst wanted tym to think n den her moving to forks led her to get over the gulit n to forgive Edward wooohoo glad In end edwella got together wooohooo. Very wellll written

Absolutely brilliant! I read this entire story in a day because I couldn't stop. It was a very plausible scenario for what could have happened. I enjoyed seeing a different side to these characters and thank you for making Edward work for it...seemed so much more realistic than Bella taking him back with open arms upon his return. Your writing is eloquent and very visual. You're very talented. Thanks so much for sharing this story with us.

That was amazing, I swear. Read it all in one day, that's how addicting it was. Never thought of Edward being immature, but it fits. I always figured there was something wrong with him in canon, but all I could come up with is just remarking how he's not prefect and how Bella is blind, as is love, especially young love. But this makes so much sense and the way you wrote it was beautiful. All the speeches against Edward had me giddy with joy and rooting for the ranter. He deserved it and it helped him mature, once he thought on them. Love the idea about Bella teaching and what type of job did Edward get exactly? Not sure that was direct enough for me, but maybe you wanted it vague to leave the imagination go its own course. The ending with Jake, Carole and the twins made me so sad... splitting ways with a friend, even if that's not the correct phrase for it. The story of Brady made me tear up and for some odd reason I just want my heart to bleed more and read more into what happened, what it looked like, and the pain. Forget I just said that. The fact that Bella wasn't depressed ONLY over the Edward-tragedy makes this story fantastic, and the fact that Bella pointed it out to him, telling Edward that the situation is bigger than them and how she cares, worries, and essentially pays attention to others people now other than him, was an epic WIN. Wonder if that would classify as a minor crowning moment of awesome, not sure. Although this story has a sort of "happy ending" to it (repeat SORT OF), it's not generic and you still give us readers that tone of sorrow that was etched throughout the entirety of this fic. Heartbreaking really, but fitting and makes this story, as Bella put it, "Feel whole".

So, thank you for writing this story. I truly appreciate it and I enjoyed it to no end. All the emotions were well written out, making me feel the pain, and I love that. You write so well :D

Great story :D

I really appreciated this chapter, especially Bella's letter to Edward. So many of these stories, and even the real books, have Bella forgiving Edward and jumping back into a relationship after one simple sorry. While I do believe in forgiveness in real live, I also know that people have to heal and sometimes that means taking a break and both people working on each other before jumping back into a relationship. So thanks for Bella's words.

this is cool

never mind then this story officially sucks.

i am sort of enjoying your story here but what was the point of jacobs point of view? i didnt much care for it not that i have anything against the character. i just dont see how his pov was relevant to the story. it didnt fill in anything that we didnt already know and there was no warning that you were going to switch to a new pov that isnt the main povs of edward and bella. i think it takes away from the story. but whatever. i guess i will still read but i really hope that there is no more of his pov unless it adds something to the story other than wasting time from the plot.

I love this story! It's so beautifull.

This was my very first fan fic ever. Thank you for writing this and please keep writing!