Hopefully Elli doesn't feel too much of a connection to this Jack fellow. That would be a rather disturbing thing to see.

That was an incredibly good story. I thought the friendship throughout the whole thing was spot on. And both the relationship (elli and Claire/Elli and Doctor) were humourous and very believable. =)

Okay... D: I've been reading a list of the worst reveiws all day...So I'm really tempted to say something like
'OmG! upate so00n!!1!one!!1'
Even though it's a one shot...
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But~ I won't...
It was great though. I opened it up,expecting to find hetero which I'm seriously sick of...
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But much to my pleasure it wasn't! Anyways, I think I'm starting to like this pairing...Again, great job!
I loved it!

Yay! Harvest Moon with the wonderful characters I'm familiar with! :D
I'm not a huge fan of Elli, but I think she's quite a cute one - she's my 2nd choice, after Popuri. :)
Either way, great characterisation, pretty action-packed snowball scenes, sprinkled liberally with your famously amusing dialogue.
- So you're not just a legend on the forums alone, then? :D

Another fic, enjoyed and reviewed. :)
- Dixie. x x x