not too bad, i liked it.. i know that ur teacher will never look at you the same or ask to see what your writing anymore. been there done that... i laughed at the endin

Love it!

I love it! Great use of repetition, and that 'foot in mouth' internal monologue was brilliant

Thoroughly delightful

Gx

I am the master of late reviews. x)

I'm not good with this. I'm perfect with this. :) It was amazing, dear. And now I'm going to go read the story you mentioned in your Author's Note, because I have this irrational fear of reading stories ? I don't know, I run for the hills when it comes to chaptered fics. Occasionally. Occasionally, all I want to read are stories. x) But usually I'm a one shot person...

Anyway. Besides my inane ramblings. Much love.

x, Jennifer

Ah.. I loved it. Well developed and humorous, and good use of motifs.

Aw, that was so sweet! -said with high, annoying babyish voice-

Very nice! I can so see Greg getting annoyed over Nicky asking "Why" all the time ;-)