WOW - good story; really loving this. Been away for a while, so nice surprise to come back to two chapters! Looking very forward to the next one! Hope a muse hits you sometime real soon :o)

No! Sharane, Cole CAN'T be dead..

please please update this soon!!

Cole's dead?!

Wow I'm shocked!
I wonder what happens next

good update - glad they were able to find their son. Be interesting to see where you take this next. Thanks for sharing your story with us.

Hi Sharane,

Kind of got stuck at chapter 4... agree, something not quite right, but... wasn't confused, but just somehow doesn't seem to fit, kind of awkward... except for Cole being left with "limbo", almost doesn't seem a point for it being there.. but...

completely redeemed with chaps 5-7! very nice.. like that they remembered An-Ling and thought to ask her help, and love that this time, limbo is not an ugly loveless void (like Cole was condemned to after the horror of CC). Interesting that limbo is populated by vanquished half-demons... always thought Cole was unique (made him even more special)..

One slip here though.. you had Cole shimmer An-Ling and Phoebe to the top of the waterfall.. how is it possible for him to do that now that he's completely "mortal" and "human".. When the sisters resurrected him after his body rejected all the Wasteland powers, he was completely human again.. with no powers. So, how is it possible for him to shimmer now?

Otherwise, I'm loving this one! So glad Phoebe and Cole have found their son, but I don't think its going to be as simple as "now they have him and just go home".. I think Roark and company are going to realize just who Cole really is and will seek retribution and revenge.. just a sneaking suspicion here ;)

looking forward to chapter 8!

Great
I loved it

The suspense is killing me...>.

Really enjoying this one, can't wait to see what happens in limbo.

I wasn't confused. I just wish I had MORE!! Nice work.

Wow - terrific story. Would be great to "retrieve" Cole & Pheeb's lost son. Another story we would have like to have seen...

Woah... I'm excited.

Oh yeah, Cole was smooth. xD Keep it up.

First of all, I loved "Finally", and second of all, you;re a really good author. Seriously, this story is a nice follow up to Finally. Keep writing!! =D

Sharane,

one word for this one... WOW! totally unexpected and I love it.

When Leo called for "Victor" you had me for a sec... first thing I cold think of was Phoebe & Piper's father.. As soon as he asked if he was "Victor Coleridge" I knew... Actually Victor Colereidge "Turner" (or maybe Halliwell if they're going to keep to tradtion)..

But, I knew it was Cole and Phoebe's son. So, since he's there from 2023 and Leo already said he was a future whitelighter, its already a given... Cole and Phoebe's son IS GOD... and always was.. It was only the Seer's tonic that was poisoning him and Phoebe with evil... Tonic gone, evil influence gone.. both reverted to their own "good" nature. And, it proves that no matter what the Seer told Phoebe, the baby always was hers and Coles, and conceived in and by love! He was never the Source's "evil spawn"!

And now you're going to sit there and make me wait! I am so not good at dealing with cliff-hangers [ unless I'm already in on them ;) which means of course, you could e-mail me!! ;) ]

can't wait for the next chapter!