Good god that was hilarious. So many parodies, so little time. Thank you for that!

Kind of random ... I like that! Extremely funny, and it's going onto my favourites!

Lmao. alright...

It's a bit odd, but I LOVED your portal reference.

I just had to say that. And it also had a random ending. Definitely not expected. But, it made me laugh.

WOW I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOU STORY!

It's the best one I've read, oh the hilarity!

I laughed at every single line!

*sighes*

The cake is s lie Gin-sempai.

"SHOOP DAT FUCKIN' WHOOT" nuff said

So random

I love shit like this! W00TW00T! ph33r mY 133t sk11s!

one shortened phrase.

lol why did he tear out gins organs..?

:L Funny! I like how it looked like finally something normal was going to happen, after Gin writing fanfictions with loads of snogging and Tsukune writing a poem about cake and passing it off as a Yuri fanfic, it looked like it was going to turn into a yaoi after all...then Tsukune killed him. So random. It was really funny :) x

I liked the ending...kinda wierd, but it was still ok.

You need serious help. Also, that was one of the funniest things I've ever read. I love how you basically took a shot at half the M-rated fanfiction on this site and Stephen King both in one fanfic. The ending was probably my favorite part, though "the cake is a lie, the cake is a lie, the cake is not a lie, etc." is close. I look forward to reading more of you work.

Sincerely,

Alina Scharwyn

*snickers* Tsukune's gone evil at the end. Great story.

wow tsukune... didn't know he could rip out organs lol the yuri

BWAHAAHAHA! That was amazing.

I especially loved the Portal reference!